this was pretty good, the begining seemed a little slow, but it was still a good story. and kinda cute.

This one-shot was pretty good. Aside from a few minor spelling/grammer errors and a somewhat hard-to-read bunched paragraph at the beginning, it was great.

I think a sequel would be fine, as would a one-shot involving Raguna helping Mist and Anette learn to cook. I can't decide what would be better. You can always do both if you want.