it was okai, kinda weird tho, was that the end of it or is there a second part to it, im kinda cunfoosed, well keep writing if theres more...

heheh!! pretty good except your paragraphs ARE kinda long... anyways i thought it was great but i just... dont like Leeki or Takari (Leekato and Ruri damnit ^_~) eh... and thats all because i've got to go study for my finals... my brain is pretty destroyed at this moment... oh but i have to say this:
please please please update Hirota?? pleeeeeeease??

wow..its realli hard to read. its cooL tho-jenruki ^^ heh put dem in more paragraphs nex time.
-jaNe-