Lol I never watched this show but, you make me want to lol. I laughed when you where talking about Shawn being called sexy bahahaha how Gus or whatever was mad bahaha.

It's okay. I understand virus hijacked my computer and finally got it fixed a few days ago.

This story is good so far and everyone needs a little break. Just do your best on the chapter and dont feel pressured to get it in. Just make it reeeaaallllyyy gooood

update!

Please don't kill Shawn! Seeing as ImSecretlyInTheCIA I know for sure that sniper attacks are not fun unless you're watching it in the movies. I really do love the story, though. Update soon please!

Great, very excting story! Hooray for Lassie's lightning fast reflexes! Who could the evil goons be and why do they want Shawn outta the picture so bad? I can't wait for the next chapter!

I really liked this description "twinkling stars were obscured by the smoke grey clouds hanging low over the silent city" :)

Ooo and I loved all the references to Micheal Westin and John McClain!

Well, I'm confused, but in a good way. Communing with the Thesaurus is a fun activity. You learn all sorts of fun words.

The kitty lives whoo hoo! Where is Shawn hiding and can't wait to see Henry's reaction when he finds out about the sniper set out to kill his son.

interesting! Will wait and see what happens next :)

Omg what did you do to my Shawn! You better not kill him! Lol but this is such a good story I love it sooooooo much :) Keep up the great work!

yeah, cliffhanger lately? The page breaks help a lot, glad you got it to work. I'll be looking for updates!

You made me gasp! I can't wait for the next one.

Reviewing! This story looks so intense! And you really nailed Shawn and Gus' personalities! Good job!

Interesting. Can't wait for an update.

Sweet! I love it!