|Reviews for Apple of my Eye|
| Prince Artemis 4/12/13 . chapter 11
But you have not put anything up on the site! If this is wrong than please send me a PM with the link to your account, I really want to read more of this Story.
| namco402 4/7/13 . chapter 8
There are more chapters on
| DragonRiderandBioBolt 1/21/13 . chapter 10
Next chapter... Next chapter... FAK
| WheelerDarkspin 12/30/12 . chapter 10
Is there going to be anymore of this fanfic? I know I speak for all of us when I say that this fanfic needs to be updated. It has almost everything perfectly. And the use of 2nd person point of view is quite a catch. Please try & update this fanfiction soon.
Still burning rubber
| Guest 11/11/12 . chapter 10
is there going to be any more
| firemandan56 10/2/12 . chapter 10
You ever gonna finish this?! It's such a great fanfic, and I'd hate to see it left the way it is right now!
| Le Serpent Master 9/8/12 . chapter 10
You are amazing...
If you would be so kind as to create the next chapter to this story soon, I would grant you access to glorious, GLORIOUS cheese wheels! :3
P.S. For some reason, after the tabasco rattlesnake thing i couldnt stop giggling...
| namco402 9/8/12 . chapter 2
Update. UP DATE NOW!
| DarkShroudedSky 8/28/12 . chapter 10
More... I need to read more... This is very entertaining. This is an awesome story and the first 2nd person story I have ever read.
| namco402 8/27/12 . chapter 10
Awesome chap update more plz
Also I bet $1,000,000 dollers that tos story is going to end with AJ and you playing super smash bro's :\
| Guest 8/26/12 . chapter 10
This Is by far one of the best fanfics I have read, definetley one of my top 2. Please finish this
| ShiningShadow1965 8/26/12 . chapter 10
This is a very sweet and touching chapter. I enjoyed it excellent job on your part in the set up and plot development bravo.
| MrJorge624Pinkie pie 8/26/12 . chapter 10
Omfg I LOVE big macintosh in this chapter!
| ebk21 8/16/12 . chapter 1
Nice I like the chapters and the lengnth is perfect (Sorry for not spelling it right)
Hope for more chapters like this
| namco402 8/5/12 . chapter 9
dammm good ass up date bro awesome story post soon