I find Gerard's nickname adorable. Good work, too. Just remember to read over your stuff before posting it. Sometimes deletes stuff. I've been a victim of that before.

CS: I see story, and I likey story. XDDD Me want more!

Aww...So sweet and fluffly. I love this pairing, and nice names for those two. Cant wait for the next chapter. I'll be rooting for ya', gurl! :)

I'm glad to see another fan of WoL/Light, or a fellow Light-shipper. :) This story's got some latent potential, I like it.

I like how you brought out the two's tender sides. Just remember to use some flashbacks to explain their backstory. After all, we're mostly used to a stubborn, cold Lightning, and a distant, stoic Warrior.

I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon, kay? I'm looking forward to this ;)