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  L-loves-jayna-and-hates-piper 6/9/12 . chapter 1 This is so beautifully sad! Silly Jason for choosing piper. I really hope he chooses Reyna in the actual book... Anywho this is really good and very well written, I'll go read your other fic now. |
| L-loves-jayna-and-hates-piper 6/9/12 . chapter 1 This is so beautifully sad! Silly Jason for choosing piper. I really hope he chooses Reyna in the actual book... Anywho this is really good and very well written, I'll go read your other fic now. |
| JenyaATW 6/5/12 . chapter 1 Love it. You should write more. I love this shippibg |
 IamBellatrixLieutenantofVoldy 6/4/12 . chapter 1Ooooo...so depressing yet so good! Wait a moment, please. I have to do something. *slaps Jason* YOU IDIOT! Jason: Ouch, what was that for? That was for leaving Reyna and choosing PIPER! You caused all that! Jason: *looks down* I-I regret it. YOU SHOULD! IDIOT! Why didn't you remember Reyna in the first place, anyway? Jason: I guess...I dunno. Percy remembered Annabeth because of the Styx thing. I guess I didn't remember her because...I dunno... Me: *raises sword and prepares to kill him but hesitates* You know what? I'm gonna turn back time, because me, being the awesome me, can do that. And, Imma make you smarter, too! Jason: Really? YEAH! Abra-KAZAM! Jason: *opens eyes* I don't remember anything. *takes hand away from girl* Piper: Jason? It's me, Piper, your girlfriend... Jason: *frowns* My girlfriend? *Thinks, "she's really pretty"* *Shakes head* I'm sorry...I just don't remember...*strains* I'm trying to remember something but, I just can't. *glances at Piper* Your eyes...they change color...*thinks, "That reminds me of someone...someone I should remember...what eye color does she have anyway?"* LATER AFTER THE QUEST... Jason: *gains memories of Reyna* Reyna...her eyes. Her dark brown eyes... Piper: Hey Jason! Jason: *startled* Your eyes don't change color anymore...they're dark brown, just like Reyna. Piper: Who's Reyna? Annabeth: No, Piper's eyes are sea-green, just like Percy...*shrugs* Must be an Aphrodite thing. DURING THE REUNION Jason: REYNA! *smiles happily* Reyna: JASON! *grabs her dagger and tries to kill him* YOU LEFT ME FOR A MONTH! I AM GOING TO- Jason: Uhh...*kisses her* Reyna: Whoa. Piper: No! *cries* Aphrodite: Hon, I'm sorry, but you were never meant to be with him. *turns to Jason and Reyna* MY NEW FAVORITE COUPLE! Me: *sits back and relaxes* I'm so epic! -A very epic Scarlett Rose |
| Wonderstruck Pen 6/4/12 . chapter 1 Great job, although it was exceptionally angsty! Keep writing! -Pen |
