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| Really Bad Fanfiction 2003-11-04 ch 1,  | abuseNeed a little polishing. Look at the last line: "And yet, I still wonder if what I heard was not a child...but a Witch." It's missing something. A horror story has to end on a soaring, hideous note... this is too... er... quiet. You want a quick, chilling punch-line. Otherwise, good job. |
| Mrs.Legolas091(Wicca woman ... 2003-09-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseagain another great one |
| Chai 2002-11-10 ch 1, | abuseThis was very good, I am impressed. If only I could write like that. |