Interesting story. I don't read much Star Wars fan fiction, but I can tell I will enjoy this one. Please keep writing.

Very very very GOOD

Aww Vader has a heart after all! lol excellent chapter, I look forward to more D

Luke's already affecting Vader. I can't wait to see what happens during Luke's training.

I love your story! I especially love that Luke ad Leia are in it. Most stories are just based around Luke, and while I love that its nice to see her as a child too. I hope that Vader lightens up with Luke and of course that Luke will bring him back to the light. And I'm interested to find out who Nabarrie is, and her story. Please update soon, I can't wait for the next chapter!

This fic has me officially intrigued D keep up the awesome work

Very very very GOOD
The ship was "Devastator"?

Sounds good! Typical Leia too with the last line.

Interesting beginning... I'm asking how long Vader will withhold the truth from Luke and how the boy will adjust to the dramatic change in his life.
Anyway, it's good how you could keep Vader in character till now.

Good start!

*Nods* Good, very good!

This is an interesting new story, and an original spin on the whole 'Vader raises Luke' idea. I hope Vader succeeds at keeping Luke away from the Emperor. He also needs to explain things to Luke soon, because he is definitely not going to win any father of the year awards, the way things are going. I hope that, as the knowledge sinks in, Vader will begin to treat Luke a little less harshly. Maybe the dream-encounter with his conscience will help him do that. I loved that dream, by the way. The whole thing was like a a chilling horror story, but unfortunately for Vader, it's also his life. Great job!

This is a really great and interesting begining! If possible please update thanks a lot!

I SEE POTENTIAL! And lots of it! Please write more!

Great chapter, the story is going at a fantastic pace.