Ash,
I read this three times,this is a great love are a great writer,keep
up the good work.
Julie.

Sully's fantasy in chapter 14... Swoon! I'm just sad he left before everyone was up on Christmas morning. :(

YEEEEHAAAA! That's what I said when I got the alert about another chapter of this great story. :D Short, but good, and it gave me a reason to go back and read the last two, hehe. Once again, you pegged everyone's emotions perfectly and I can't wait until you dive into the next episode - lots of Sully and Michaela interaction, plus him doctoring her, hehe. Girl, take care of yourself and get over that sickness all the way! :D

Please keep this lovely story going. It is awhile since you have posted.

Great story! Love the insights.

aaaagah such a good story! keep going keep going!

Wow - a pre-wedding incident made them feel a lot. How will they react to that? Will Sully come more often now to keep their friendship to a higher level? Can't wait to read more of this!

Great story you presented your readers with. You so affectionately fill gaps of the real story with lovely details and particulars, - I love it. Can't wait to read more of this!

Love this...I love how you're taking the story and expanding on it. Love the dreams too. Can't wait for more!

This was good...and considering the next episode after the pilot was the epidemic, this makes perfect sense that they were having 'dreams' like this, especially Sully. It reminds me of him standing at the door staring while Olive sponged Michaela's bare back, hehe. Loved this: "Sully was reminded that Michaela was not his to gaze upon. He had to get away from this house. She was seeping into his soul and Sully knew that once she had hold he would never get rid of the ache that had buried itself in his chest." ...Seeping into his soul, awesome line :)
And this:
The following morning Michaela woke with a start to Brian's voice. "Look ma! Look! There are presents!" She smiled warmly at him and eased out of bed with a yawn. It didn't take long for her to realize that someone was missing. Sully was gone… again.
Sigh, can't wait for more of their thoughts. :)

VERY nice. I could just picture it happening this way. Don't worry about any breaks in the chapters. Real life gets in the way sometimes. We're just thankful for your wonderful writing when you have time.

Carol :-)

Omygosh another chapter! Yeeeeeeha! Oh I loved all of this, especially the dreams and imaginings. Hehe, you've captured what I always thought he might be thinking behind those brooding crystal blue eyes every time he looked at her. :D
This made me chuckle: "Sully? Where did you go?" Michaela asked with a quirk of her eyebrow. Sully groaned and adjusted himself. He would need to think about something else quickly before she realized what he had been thinking about.
Hehehe naughty boy, she would have turned beet red if she could have read his thoughts, lol. But the way he would always stare at her, that's exactly what he was probably thinking, lol!
Loved how she used Brian's 'concern' to tell him she had been thinking and worrying about him. LOL and that final thing about him lying there by the fire thinking about her, hehe. Poor starving Sully. ;)
Loved it all! Super job, as always. Next please? LOL.

This story is so good, you have put so much feeling into it
I look forward to reading the rest.

Beautiful insights, can't wait to read more of your work!

Loved it... Loved it... Loved it! Only just discovered 'fan fiction' today, and your beautifully written insights into the Dr Quinn Pilot. Once I started reading I could not stop until I had completely finished. You write as if you really 'feel' the emotions and the inner turmoil of both Mike and Sully. I have recently rewatched the entire series... and now I feel like starting all over again! Your writing is beautiful and powerful and really touched me... far away in Australia... October 2012. (Not sure when you wrote this Ash, but I hope there is more... I will be looking). Congratulations!