Hehe.. When I read at the beginning that you had collected all the common cliches of the genre in this story, I almost didn't start reading. But I did. Which led to me sitting in my desk chair reading this story for the ENTIRE DAY! (That's the sign of a good story, but I'm not telling you that because you made me unproductive.) I have one criticism to make-there were weird times when the dialogue of the Americans became British (e.g. "trying to start a row") and the British became Americanized (e.g. "Merry Christmas"). Well, now that I've gotten that out of the way-what an incredible story! I haven't checked your profile yet to see how far you have gotten on the sequel, I'm off to do that right now, but I thought you deserved a nice long review first so you would know how much I enjoyed the story. :-D

interest starts here for me

Pretty good fic. I thought it a touch predictable that you were going to make Harry have a sister, but not a bad way to work your way into it. Annoying how they do not tell them this tid bit, however, I am sure that it is much in the fashion of JKR. Just wanted to tell you, it really, for some reason, does annoy me a great deal when people can not get the simple fact down that Harry KNEW FULL WELL that his father was a SEEKER shortly after he was placed on the house team in his first year. So you having McG saying his father was a chaser, well, sucky, and you having Harry actually having to ask about it, just flat out dim.

Other than that, seems a good fic. Not that I expect you to read this anyhow...

Ciao

I forgot one thing. I absolutely adored Joe! He was hilarious! thanks so much.

I would just like to say that this is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. Even though I found out (to my deep sadness) that you decided to not finish the sequel I still would like to thank you for the help and inspiration this story has provided for me in my own writing. You are a very talented writer and I do hope you continue to do so. Throughout the story, I was always on the edge of my seat and wanting to be on the computer more. And after I got off it filled my brain as I tried to figure out what was going to happen. I love Adrienne so much because she is not as perfect (he he!) as Harry can sometimes be and she has more significant weaknesses. I personally would have liked to see more of Sirius but I have that problem with my story as well. Your creativity is absolutely astounding and again I would like to thank you for taking us all on this wonderful and enthralling journey that will forever change my view on Harry Potter. :)

This story is great so far. I look forward to reading more.

that was so cool

dude you sorta mixed up glenn and mondel... mondel is dead and you use him in place of glenn...

This is great. xDD Good job. xP

interesting plot

OMG! THis story is amazing! poor Adrienne! Will she EVER be able to master her powers? Will she go back to Hogwarts next year and be called Potter then?

wow.. great... fantastic... can i say more! it is getting hard to find decent HP fanfics.. this is one of the few i love!

nice work

loving this can't read anymore now though...

i'm really enjoying this! can't wait to read more. will have to be tomorrow though...