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| Maiqu 2008-04-08 ch 16,  | abusei loved it..i'm guessing zach got shot w/ a tranquilizer gun or something |
| darkest angel6490 2007-06-08 ch 16, | abusethis was so good! someone has to finish it! i need to know what happens next! |
| meow114 2006-12-08 ch 16, | abuseUPDATE! |
| PandylBas 2006-10-04 ch 16, | abusecontinue on |
| polka.dot.pineappple 2006-09-11 ch 16, | abuseyour stories awesome so far... i like stories where Ben didnt go crazy... plz update soon! |
| Boleyn 2006-08-07 ch 16, | abuseGreat story, please update soon and let everything be alright, it's great seeing Ben and Alec together and seeing how they would work together in a unit |
| purplebunnywabbit 2006-07-04 ch 16, | abuseHey I like it so far... you need to write more! LOL just kidding take your time! I would rather see a good ending than a quick sloppy one... besides I am sure you are just as busy as I generally am and that leaves very little time to write! I feel your pain lol... anyways I can't wait to see what you have in store! |
| darkangelgirl262 2006-05-20 ch 16, | abuseHi! I just finished reading all the chapters, and I think your fic rocks! I really like it! the whole plot is great, Max and her sibs never leaving, and Alec being the rebel and not Max-fuuny twist! anyway, this is an awesome fic! and I really want you to keep reading it, but for that, you have to update! I noticed its been more than a few months since your last update, but I really hope you'll update soon, cause this fic is too great to leave it like this, unfinished! so update ASAP! |
| timetowaste247 2006-05-09 ch 5, | abuseI really like the atmosphere you have developed here. I'd love to read more. |
| latinapotterfan 2006-03-01 ch 16, | abuseI like where this is going, can't wait to read the next update. |
| AngelKougaeri 2006-03-01 ch 16, | abuseUpdate soon!! AnGeL |
| liz 2006-02-28 ch 14, anon. | abusethis chapter was funny and I think that the story is coming along great. however, this is one detail that I can not see as being faliable. No one person can appricate Alec in a couple of seconds, it takes a week to seven months, its documented fact. However, I understand that you had the shorten it up a bit. |
| Boleyn 2006-02-17 ch 14, | abuseI'm sorry I meant I was glad Jack was mentioned, I wasn't paying attenttion to what I was typing. |
| Boleyn 2006-02-17 ch 15, | abuseThis story is very good, I'm glad Ben and Jack are alive please update soon |
| dreamofdesire 2005-12-10 ch 15, | abuseI really, really like this story! I can't to read what happens next! Pleasae update soon. |