Gah... loved it! Absolutely hot! You should SO write more of these two, in a longer fic... *_*

Love your ficcie! Your words seems to flow on a string of invisible thread...I can't wait until the sequel is out!

M...yummy. Something in me just screams CAN'T WAIT TILL SEQUEL!

Nice. So nice. I actually read this off , but now I can review! Everything was...perfect. No typos, great descriptions, wonderful pacing and word usage, characters fit oh-so-well. This fic made me a forever fan of Ran/Schu, so thanks so much for that. Sequel would be great, but hey, this stands so wonderfully on its own.

Simply said...fantastic. _

*R-chan*

M. nice, very nice fic here. I admire your writing style. The words you chose and the way you were able to convey the little differences and shades of physical sensations and images. It was all very subtle for a rape, and it conveys perfectly the idea of a 'mindfuck'.

I'd love to see this written into a series. Really, your writing is beautiful and captured the subject and emotions in this situation very well_

Wow the imagery gets top marks from me. You described Schu in quite a

way and I was going 'Whoa, whoa. Schu's giving Ran some action.' Oh

yeah! Sehr gut! Ausgezeichnet :D Ich liebe Schuldig und Ran. LOL.

My German is bad. Haven't studied it for ages _;; Great writing piece.

That was really good. I liked it a it up.

Mm... oh, yum, yum. I do rather like SchuxAya, and I can hear this fic screaming, loud as day, "SEQUEL! I DEMAND A SEQUEL!" Really, does Aya remember his dream bed partner? Does he even know it's Schu? After all, he could remember the sensations, but not the voice. And do the other Weiß kittens have an idea that he was there? How does Aya act after, and how do they deal with a post orgasm Aya?

Oh my, truly yummy. One of the best SchuxAya I've read in a while. More please.

Very hot, very delicious. Wonder what Yohji would do if he found out?