Since this is obviously a retelling of #7, why is Erek in it?
Erek was found in #10!

Very, very, interesting. Did you know that the entire Animorphs series, not just the last book, took place in a city called Orsen(not too sure about the spelling), California? And that though Sunnydale does not actually exist in California, but another city, "Sunnyvale" is located in exactly the same place as where Sunnydale was in the books? Cool story, by the way.

very interesting would like to see more of it.

Very cool! Write More!

I like this story!

Now where's the next one?

I like it! Finish it please. I hope you do, puh-lease finish it :whines:

I don't think Buffy would make a good controller but it would be fun to see.

Interesting.

A good start, but could use some work. The flow's a bit off.

Uhh...I don't think Buffy and Cassie are the same age. Cassie's probably 14, and Buffy's 18. But keep going it sounds good.

it's not that I don't like it. those are like my two favorite thing seriously. it has potential as long as you finish it.

Umm...it seems intruging, but continue it please. This seems more like a prologue than an actual part. Sorry.

what's next ok story

Well that was interesting...never read anything like that before.

Normally I would say that spelling isn't a very important part of a story, but your story has too many spelling errors to be ignored. Spelling and punctuation are pretty important in a story, becase with out the correct spelling and punctuation your story is less attracting and less people will want to, or see a point to reading your story. No detail, no plot, no suspense. You story has a lot to be worked on.