Great start.

This was my first Awake fic to read. Very good. I really enjoyed the show and this was a really good continuation.

Good Job :)

I too am sorry to see Awake end. I'm very thankful for good fan fiction writers to carry the story on.

Your first chapter is a wonderful beginning to what I expect will be a great story. The characters are well-written, the story is interesting and seems well-thought-out so far, and the writing mechanics are good too (nothing gets in the way of a good story like sloppy writing, so I applaud you on your good writing :-) ). I am really looking forward to the remaining chapters, and I hope you'll write more with other possible continuations of their story.

BLUE REALITY, GO!

I have named this third reality the blue reality. Simply because Britten always wears blue...

Sorry I didn't review this earlier, I've been traveling in China but I'm pretty stable now. Wonderful start - I'm in a bit of a hurry but I'm so glad you decided to publish this.

-Ariana