This is terrific!

Entertaining and funny. You are one of the better writers, since you don't need cursing, graphic sex, pain and torture to write a good story as so many of the lesser talented seem to think they have to. Especially those who write fan fiction for S&H & ASJ and a good many of those I've never finished the entire story. The decent stories of those 2 fandoms I like as I enjoyed the 2 series so much. I've never watched "Laramie" but now I would like to as your stories have caught my interest. Thanks.

Prudent is not a word to describe Jess Harper... but then, it don't fit ol' Slim neither.
You'd think those boys would learn!

A tale arter me own heart, this is...

Oh, too much fun! I could 'see' this whole thing. lol

I'll bet Slim took a minute to really think, the next time he came upon a similar situation. :D

Some guys don't know when to shut up, either. *snort*

Awesomely done. :)

Hey! Are you watching Longmire? I love it! The sheriff with his hat on reminds me so much of Jess. Plus, it's a good show. :)

Another great story. I was so pleased to get notification you'd published another. I particularly liked the end, funny and so true to the characters.

Oh, what fun! I loved the ending, too; poor Jess, he really did deserve it, though. You have a wonderful talent of understatement; it makes your work so delightful to read. Thanks for a great story!

perfectly perfect! couldn't be better - I love the banter - and the innocence of Slim - and the kindness. Yup, perfectly perfect!

Jess, my love, will you never learn when to shut up?