I read this first on the website, came here to comment.

First off, I wanted to say that the ending was masterfully done. My goodness, it was just chilling, and your timing/writing/dialogue everything was what made it so.

Your writing in general is wonderful-funny, fantastically displaying the relations between characters (that's one of the things I like the most about you), and has indirectly inspired my latest drabble series (Curious Encounters) about the inspectors. I think I've favorited you as an author already, I'll try again after the review just to make sure. And favorite the excerpt, which should be looked at by everyone if only for the ending alone.

Amazing and I can't wait for the rest! You have outdone yourself!

I like this right here. Very good.

The bit at the end brought everything back down to earth again. *sniff* Just a little depressing.

Ani