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| aimtbj 2003-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked it, but it sure looked awfully familiar! |
| Rhapsody81 2002-06-06 ch 1, | abusethis was a load of sap and crap and i loved every minute of it!!!! Good Job! |
| Violet 2002-06-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseNot all that original, but okay. Jean and Scott already have two children, though - Rachel and Nathan - but I guess you're just using "artistic licence", so messing with character families is okay. Anyway, make the next chapter (if there is one) a little more interesting. |