|Reviews for One Piece: A Queen's Tale|
| xXxEmeraldBlueXxX 4/4/13 . chapter 6
I just found this story and I have to admit. it's pretty good! A little short but that's not really a problem as long as you continue the good work! ;)
| San child of the wolves 4/3/13 . chapter 6
Nice chapter. I can't wait to read the next one. Good luck with it.
| slycooperfangirl4 7/14/12 . chapter 5
you coud'v just knocked ya'know"
"i did...you could'v just answered ya'know"
LOL fav chapter so far :D
here's a tip try describing things in larger description like
"the island was big." NO just...NO
"the gigantic island was full of plant life and rocky mountains" better.
use more lengthy words in sentences it biggers the page length and takes readers into thinking everything is more complicated and more interesting ;)
| Forgotten Tactic 7/11/12 . chapter 5
I'm glad you updated and that there is more character development starting to form. I hope the chapters get longer though...anyways update soon!
| San child of the wolves 7/11/12 . chapter 5
Lovely chapter. It was still rather short, but's that's fine. And I can honestly say I dont' see where the vote thing is on your page. It doesn't show a poll on the top part of your page. Anyways good luck with the next chapter. I can't wait to see who the next person to join the crew is.
| Kurono-Angel 6/28/12 . chapter 4
Whoa, I like the name of the ship! Sorry for not reviewing, I was so busy, and not to mention I'm stuck in places without wifi. Luckily I found some signal at a relative's house xD
hmm, a crew name? That's tough, it usually depends on the captain's personality, or something important to them. The Torture Pirates? LOL, ignore me xP
Hope you update soon!
| San child of the wolves 6/28/12 . chapter 4
Nice chapter. Dont' worry about being busy, it's fine. Anyways I can't wait to read the next one. Good luck with it.
| Kurono-Angel 6/15/12 . chapter 3
xDDD LOL, I love Laura's personality, it's so carefree, kind of like Luffy's C:
Alright! First mate has been scouted! Natsu is also another name for a character in another manga, I didn't realize till now :P I have a feeling he's going to have a lot on his hands, thanks to Laura...
| Decadent Decay 6/14/12 . chapter 3
Yay! An update! While I do enjoy the quick updates, I'm sure you've heard the request of having longer chapters more than a few times by now. While I agree, I come with suggestions! Do you have to take them? Heck no, but maybe it'll spark an idea or something. Anyway, I suggest slowing things down just a bit. Also, you could try taking the time to describe the settings they're in more detail. Painting a mental picture, if you will.
Regardless of the length, I enjoy where this story is and where it could go. I laughed when Laura admitted to picking a random cell. It spoke wonders about her character )
Good job so far, keep it up!
ps: Did you decide on whether or not Emi was going to be the shipwright?
| Davidrrules3018 6/14/12 . chapter 1
Name: Kira Sunebella
Devil Fruit/Weapon/Attacks: She ate the Wood Wood Fruit (translate the name if you want). It's a logia type fruit that gives her control over wood. She has the first two types of Haki but not the third. She is very adept at using her devil fruit powers, and, just like all other logia users, she can turn into her element (wood) to avoid damage unless the opponent can use Haki. She is admiral class.
Likes: She has very few likes because she a very focused and intense person. She like marines that are LOYAL, brave, and protect the innocent and weak. She loves fish (eating them).
Appearance: She has mid length brown, straight hair that she usually wears down, but puts it in a pony tail when she's fighting. Her skin colors is between pale and tan and has intense black eyes. She wears any clothes that won't impede movement when fighting and wears the admiral jacket when not in a fight. She is 5'8", and her body type is normal.
History: She comes from an island in the second half of the grand line. The Island's people were all killed by (Insert pirate here). The island was a big fishing island and was the biggest exporter of fish in the grandline. Kira went out fishing when (Insert pirate here) attacked and killed everyone on the island, including all of her family and friends. She does not talk about it.
Dislikes: PIRATES, she hates them more then anything in the world. She believes all pirates are evil and should be killed. She even hates the Shikibuaki, and refuses to be in their presence. She also hate anybody who supports pirates, whether there pirates, or not. She even dislikes Marines that are friends with any pirates or are any friendly grounds with any pirates. She dislikes any meat that is not fish.
Personality: She is a very serious and intense person. She does not talk much, but when she does it's something important. Her tramatizing past with pirates has caused her to be cold and distant to any person who tries to get close to her. It also led to her deep hatred of pirates. She is always very serious, even when fighting. Her fellow Marines see her as serious, cool, collected, and intense towards pirates.
Dream: To exterminate all pirates and bring an end to the pirate age.
Other: Fishing is the only hobby she has outside of training and fighting pirates.
| Ryuzaki Hanabishi 6/14/12 . chapter 3
wow, natsu so cool, how strong natsu was?and laura have a unique devil fruit, wait ur update,
ps : ur story was to short, please write a medium story lenght, thanks :D
| San child of the wolves 6/14/12 . chapter 3
Cool, nice chapter. A bit short, but that's alright. Natsu sounds really cool, I can't wait to see more of him and Laura. And I can't wait to see who made it into Laura's crew. Well good luck with the next chapter. I hope it's a longer chapter.
| Ryuzaki Hanabishi 6/12/12 . chapter 2
wow, who is the swordman?and will Laura save him?update
| Decadent Decay 6/10/12 . chapter 2
I have to say I'm really liking this so far. Laura is really amusing to me. I liked her thought process after she woke up on the docks )
Personally, I would like the chapters to be longer, but that's just because I like it so much that I want more )
Keep up the good work,
| Kurono-Angel 6/10/12 . chapter 2
Great update! Looks like she found her first crewmate, swordsman/first mate (possibly?)
Lol, I love how he's all like, "Women, tsk." Kind of funny, if you ask me C:
Wow, already Marine trouble! Well, i guess without them, the story wouldn't be as exciting..
Anyways, hope u update sooon!