Very well written. I loved every single bit of the story

That was good. I liked it.

Major deepness. I was crying at the end :( One question though: where is Harry? I'm guessing he's at the 'stop' he had to make before he went to Hogwarts. I was thinking either the Platform (9 and 3/4) or a graveyard? Wind and rain was mentioned so I'm thinking the latter. Anyhoo. Really sweet!

3 words; ADDS TO FAVORITES. Very nice, I haven't seen many of these stories and you did it VERY well! I'm jealous! .

What a wonderful story! I just love quiet ones like that, full of emotion (ok, I'm a big softie when it comes to Harry and Ron, but this story I think sums up a lot) Thank you very much for the inspiration from this and your other fics since I'd like to include a story with "dream team" :-) as the main focus. (And Harry would make one smashing Headmaster of Hogwarts if I do say so myself)

THIS IS SO GOOD _ and I don't think it borders on slash

That was really really good.

Very moveing and touching... I liked it!

Incredible. Simply incredible. I can't believe this was your first HP fic- it's so sensational! Really touching. It glorifies the beauty, strength, and fragility of friendship all at the same time. I have yet to read a better friendship story on ff.n, and believe me, I've read quite a few (and written one or two myself!). You obviously have immense talent as a writer and I hope to see more HP fics by you soon!

That was so sad...you right really well

omg! that was so good! you did an excellent job of writing it, so good, i was practicaly in tears (that doesn't happen often). it was so good though, and creative. keep writing, u have a talent for it.

lizz

*sniff* so very sad... well written and very touching...

Awww, man, that was SO sad. And I'm not thinking of it as a slash fic. It's fine as a friendship fic. Very well written. Congrats on that, especially since it's your first HP fic. *thumbs up from the Madd Spammer*

Wow! I think that that was the first HP fic to bring me to tears. VERY WELL WRITTEN! I prefer to ignore the slash slant, but the feelings you wrote about would be true of Harry's platonic love for Ron as well. Great job - I hope you write more HP fic.

IS THIS SUPPOSED TO BE YAOI?