Omg I wasn't sure how I felt about this story until I started reading, I love it! I can't wait for chapter 13! Update soon:)

Please please please write more? Thank you! TheLonelyDancer xx

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Please please please please write more? I really want Lysette to remember again! Thank you! TheLonelyDancer xx

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Please please please write more? This is good! I love the suspense and everything about this story! Thank you! TheLonelyDancer xx

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OMG! This is so good! You really have to continue this! I love it and I think that you are an amazing writter (Very talented and you really have a gift) Keep up the exellent work :)

Hey guy :] Im writting a story to do with make believe! Heres a chapter from my book Life and Death...If you like it there is more on my webpage- .com

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What are you drawing?” Damien questioned her again, she turned her head and passed him her drawing, she wouldn’t talk to him, showing him a picture isn’t talking Charlie assured herself. Damien studied her art; he traced his fingers over her pencil marks, “What’s the drawing representing about you?” he caught her eyes she knew she had to answer him but Ashley! He smiled at her then continued looking at the rough, edged heart drawing. “It’s about love….I find it amazing that one emotion can create so many feelings…love can be good or bad….it can change you …shape you as a person” Charlie pencilled in a stitch at the very end of the heart. “Love makes you strong no matter which side of it you stand on” Damien added, then he began to slowly draw a boy cradling a girl in his arm, “Love makes each person I think, it’s the one thing we can all relate to” She took the paper away from his hand, smiling she began to add colour to her picture. The awkwardness between them melted away, his soft voice was inviting and warm, he shared his jokes and thoughts with her, it was like they had been friends for years. “OK TIMES UP CHILDREN PLEASE MAKE SURE YOUR NAME IS AT THE TOP OF THE PAPER AND A DESCRIPTION IS PUT SOME WHERE ON YOUR SHEET” the teacher instructed the class. “OMG she’s actually talking to him! She just wants me to smack her face in…” Ashley growled to her friend. “DING DING” the bell for the second lesson rang out.

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Really like this story I think I may know what the ring is for but I won't say. Update soon!

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