I loved Seig too. It practically broke my heart when I realized what happened to him. I almost cried again reading this. This is a fantastic oneshot. I loved it.

-Queen of Narnia49

Wow. Seriously, I can't stand stories written all in first person POV, but that was just...fantastic. I mean it. This is probably one of the greatest one-shots I've ever read. It brought little baby tears to my eyes, too!
Keep on writing. You're incredibly talented at it.

wow this is really sweet. I can tell how much you really admired his character and his feelings toward Elie. Your writing isn't bad at all. I'll think I'll check out some of your others stories.