There's lots of intrigue going on in this story Anita. I like how you incorporated Agnes and Bill into the story, as well. I can't wait to read what happens next when Teaspoon and the riders go to rescue Buck and Lou.

I'm glad you're back in the saddle again. I love this story and the way you keep me on the edge of my seat. Yes Hurry Boys...gotta save Buck and Lou. Once again your detail and the way you weave new character into the story are wonderful. And the humor keeps it from being too dark... Look forward to more...hurry write soon...no rush lol...

Love it. Hope Kid & them can get them out.

I love when a plan comes together! Favorite two funny bits was Cody and Jimmy blaming each other for the ink spill and the idea of Teaspoon as a clown. :D

They are all organized and together and have a plan now though, hooray! Lou is still being totally creepy but hopefully she is rescued before she gets on that high-wire. (shudder).
Excellent chapter!

Hurry boys, I can see Lou not being afraid of the high wire or the trapeze without a net. Poor Buck hopefully Ike will come back around.

Hurray for a plan...and the thought of Teaspoon as a circus clown. I love it. The pieces are all coming together...This is still such a brilliant story! I am so glad you were able to give us an update.-J

I second that - yep, hurry boys!

Welcome back to this great story. Glad to see that the guys are getting their act together and that things are moving towards a rescue. I have a bad feeling about Lou being hypnotised into thinking she is Juliette. Lou is a natural daredevil and won't be afraid of doing Juliette's act. However, she knows nothing about acrobatics and could be seriously injured. And then there is that Pinkerton agent to contend with.

And poor Buck, although I think Gilles is wrong to think that his spirit is almost broken. I think they may find there is still some fight left in him. I think perhaps the assistance of Red Bear and a Kiowa Shaman could prove useful to Buck's mental fight for freedom.

I love the bit with Jimmy spilling the ink and throwing a scarf over it...

So the boys have a plan of sorts, and Lou is going to do the high wire and trapeze? Where's the concession stand? I want to get some popcorn before the next act! I can't wait to see where this goes!

Your writing totally sucks me in! Well done!

Wow Anita, I love this story. I'm all caught up and can't wait for an update:)

This story is full of twists and turns...I'm glad Jimmy has help within the circus to get Lou and Buck back safely...hope you write more soon.

oh boy...things are looking pretty bad. Buck's being held captive and drugged...Lou and Ike are in some sort of trance and Jimmy has a gun barrel in his back...not good at all.

A light at the end of the tunnel!

OMG, hooray!

I loved the Jimmy and Anges stuff, hee hee! and Lou acting like Juiliette was creepy and Buck SO close to being broken was just about the saddest thing ever. Anges and Gilles are awesome and you might not be so evil after all. Loved it!

Great update! More please.

Fantastic they can get Buck & Lou out.