Your story took me on a wonderful journey. I was emotionally moved. John's bravery and sacrifice, along with Sherlock sudden and painful emotional awakening, were the foundations of this story. Thank you for not only writing, but sharing.

Lots of Love.
Zacha

Wonderful! Any chance of a sequel?

John being tortured is so sad. Love the ending line though.

I'm actually crying at the ending and Sherlock's reaction to the message Moriarty sent him. What you've written it's so disturbing and emotional but it's unbelievably good. The quality is amazing and the context is so detailed that I can picture it in my head. I loved how you added the time phase to each event, so we as the reader knew what was happening to John with each passing hour. I seriously enjoyed reading this.
Chez x

Lovely. I always thought Moriarty must have done something to John in that time. You have done a wonderful job.

Ok, I'm still up late and I just finished reading this. It was very well written as always. Entertaining too. Every comment I leave is always going to be praise, you might get tired of that if I do that for every story, lol. Anyway, have a good night as always. :)

Laura

I'm off to watch "A Study in Pink"...

Ah! Loved that last sentence. In fact, I think it's entirely possible that Sherlock deleted the information of the solar system to place John's 'information' in. xD

I am very nearly in tears right now.

This was absolutely brilliant. Fantastic and wonderful and compelling and extremely well written. I could hear their voices in my head and see it all happening as I read it and... just wow. I'm amazed. My mind has been blown and you are amazing.

I loved every single bit of this! It was perfect. Don't have anything to complain about. Loved it!

This is wonderful! You nailed both John and Sherlock. Sequel? Please please please please

What a beautiful powerful story. I love it when hurt!John is so beautifully combined with BAMF!John as he is definitely, definitely that. And I loved that Sherlock made himself watch it to be there for John when he failed to before (not that he really could've known). His John. His Sherlock. They are quite a pair.