Wonderful story! Though there was one part I was hoping you would mention...where he got the harmonica. Other than that it was GREAT!

Well this was fantastic! I really liked this story. Such a great imagination to think this all up. I think Vin needs to find his parents graves though and the folks in California.

More excellent work. I was starting to wonder how you'd work in the Native American connection . . . All around a good story that keeps Vin in character.

Great story! You put a lot of work into it and it shows. Good job!