Reviews for In the Middle
JMHaughey 8/24/12 . chapter 5
You read my mind. I just thought JSQ should publish a new chapter. Clearly, it's the soulmate thing! :)

I adore this conversation with God and DiNozzo.
Anonymous033 8/12/12 . chapter 4
Geez :(

This is killing me; it's making the hairs on the back of my neck rise.

Because it's so tragic, so in character, and yet ... I can't help but to hope that things will take a turn for the better.

Please, please, tell me it gets better!

-Soph
M E Wofford 8/8/12 . chapter 4
OH NO!

This one made my ulcers burn!
dvd123 8/7/12 . chapter 4
Everything appears more solemn because of your beautiful brevity. Hoping it won't end on a tragic note? xD
Phosphorescent 8/7/12 . chapter 4
Ouch. Poor Tony, poor Ziva.

As always, this is beautifully written; I remain impressed at your ability to say so much with so little.
CrimeShowsNumber1Fan 8/7/12 . chapter 4
Aww! Are you gonna post another chapter
mentalagent13 8/2/12 . chapter 3
Great! You say so much in so few words, very impressive.
Anonymous033 7/31/12 . chapter 3
Oh my GOD.

I definitely wasn't expecting this.

Please let her be okay! Please let HIM be okay. I can't ... you are an incredible writer, to make my breath choke and my heart race with so few words.

-Soph
Phosphorescent 7/31/12 . chapter 3
Another emotional, tightly-written drabble. I look forward to seeing what happens next!
magickmoons 7/30/12 . chapter 3
Wow - great emotional impact. I can actually see the expressions shifting on Tony's face from the adrenaline rush playing around to concern to determination / terror. So wonderfully written.
EowynGoldberry 7/30/12 . chapter 3
Curious what will happen next, hope she is ok. Hope you are having a good summer.
jelenamichel 7/30/12 . chapter 3
I'm not sure how you're managing to pack so much depth into chapters that are so short, but you are. Looking forward to seeing what you do to these two.
dvd123 7/30/12 . chapter 3
You have a knack for minimalist writing, and it totally works in your favor. Beautiful.
JMHaughey 7/30/12 . chapter 3
These are lovely. I can't wait for more. (I know I always say that)

Great line. . . You can't beat Ziva with a knife. Knives are her friends.
Mechabeira 7/30/12 . chapter 3
Punch in the stomach: success. Brava. This one hurt me.
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