| Reviews for In the Middle |
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JMHaughey 8/24/12 . chapter 5You read my mind. I just thought JSQ should publish a new chapter. Clearly, it's the soulmate thing! :) I adore this conversation with God and DiNozzo. |
Anonymous033 8/12/12 . chapter 4Geez :( This is killing me; it's making the hairs on the back of my neck rise. Because it's so tragic, so in character, and yet ... I can't help but to hope that things will take a turn for the better. Please, please, tell me it gets better! -Soph |
M E Wofford 8/8/12 . chapter 4OH NO! This one made my ulcers burn! |
dvd123 8/7/12 . chapter 4Everything appears more solemn because of your beautiful brevity. Hoping it won't end on a tragic note? xD |
Phosphorescent 8/7/12 . chapter 4Ouch. Poor Tony, poor Ziva. As always, this is beautifully written; I remain impressed at your ability to say so much with so little. |
CrimeShowsNumber1Fan 8/7/12 . chapter 4Aww! Are you gonna post another chapter |
mentalagent13 8/2/12 . chapter 3Great! You say so much in so few words, very impressive. |
Anonymous033 7/31/12 . chapter 3Oh my GOD. I definitely wasn't expecting this. Please let her be okay! Please let HIM be okay. I can't ... you are an incredible writer, to make my breath choke and my heart race with so few words. -Soph |
Phosphorescent 7/31/12 . chapter 3Another emotional, tightly-written drabble. I look forward to seeing what happens next! |
magickmoons 7/30/12 . chapter 3Wow - great emotional impact. I can actually see the expressions shifting on Tony's face from the adrenaline rush playing around to concern to determination / terror. So wonderfully written. |
EowynGoldberry 7/30/12 . chapter 3Curious what will happen next, hope she is ok. Hope you are having a good summer. |
jelenamichel 7/30/12 . chapter 3I'm not sure how you're managing to pack so much depth into chapters that are so short, but you are. Looking forward to seeing what you do to these two. |
dvd123 7/30/12 . chapter 3You have a knack for minimalist writing, and it totally works in your favor. Beautiful. |
JMHaughey 7/30/12 . chapter 3These are lovely. I can't wait for more. (I know I always say that) Great line. . . You can't beat Ziva with a knife. Knives are her friends. |
Mechabeira 7/30/12 . chapter 3Punch in the stomach: success. Brava. This one hurt me. |