|Reviews for In the Middle|
| JMHaughey 8/24/12 . chapter 5
You read my mind. I just thought JSQ should publish a new chapter. Clearly, it's the soulmate thing! :)
I adore this conversation with God and DiNozzo.
| Anonymous033 8/12/12 . chapter 4
This is killing me; it's making the hairs on the back of my neck rise.
Because it's so tragic, so in character, and yet ... I can't help but to hope that things will take a turn for the better.
Please, please, tell me it gets better!
| M E Wofford 8/8/12 . chapter 4
This one made my ulcers burn!
| dvd123 8/7/12 . chapter 4
Everything appears more solemn because of your beautiful brevity. Hoping it won't end on a tragic note? xD
| Phosphorescent 8/7/12 . chapter 4
Ouch. Poor Tony, poor Ziva.
As always, this is beautifully written; I remain impressed at your ability to say so much with so little.
| CrimeShowsNumber1Fan 8/7/12 . chapter 4
Aww! Are you gonna post another chapter
| mentalagent13 8/2/12 . chapter 3
Great! You say so much in so few words, very impressive.
| Anonymous033 7/31/12 . chapter 3
Oh my GOD.
I definitely wasn't expecting this.
Please let her be okay! Please let HIM be okay. I can't ... you are an incredible writer, to make my breath choke and my heart race with so few words.
| Phosphorescent 7/31/12 . chapter 3
Another emotional, tightly-written drabble. I look forward to seeing what happens next!
| magickmoons 7/30/12 . chapter 3
Wow - great emotional impact. I can actually see the expressions shifting on Tony's face from the adrenaline rush playing around to concern to determination / terror. So wonderfully written.
| EowynGoldberry 7/30/12 . chapter 3
Curious what will happen next, hope she is ok. Hope you are having a good summer.
| jelenamichel 7/30/12 . chapter 3
I'm not sure how you're managing to pack so much depth into chapters that are so short, but you are. Looking forward to seeing what you do to these two.
| dvd123 7/30/12 . chapter 3
You have a knack for minimalist writing, and it totally works in your favor. Beautiful.
| JMHaughey 7/30/12 . chapter 3
These are lovely. I can't wait for more. (I know I always say that)
Great line. . . You can't beat Ziva with a knife. Knives are her friends.
| Mechabeira 7/30/12 . chapter 3
Punch in the stomach: success. Brava. This one hurt me.