|Reviews for In the Middle|
| Anonymous033 7/11/12 . chapter 2
I don't know how you manage to make something so short sound so depressing (in a good way), haha. It's a talent!
You're so good at conveying their emotions through so few words.
It breaks my heart, seeing how hard she tries and how little she manages to move forward :(
| Phosphorescent 7/10/12 . chapter 2
Another insightful drabble.
| JMHaughey 7/9/12 . chapter 2
I adore these drabbles. . .
. . . stuck in the middle of nowhere. ;)
| Amilyn 7/7/12 . chapter 2
I like he reference to how she doesn't trust her own inner voice on whether she's found the right person. I think I wanted more punch on that concept, though.
| Leah339 7/7/12 . chapter 2
Awww beautiful *.*
| jae-vous 7/7/12 . chapter 2
I love your writing. You convey so much with so little
| Alidiabin 7/7/12 . chapter 2
I love this look into Ziva. She need direction so very much. Wonderful.
| magickmoons 7/6/12 . chapter 2
Another wonderfully poignant entry.
| Phosphorescent 7/1/12 . chapter 1
Absolutely wonderful! I'm impressed with how much you've managed to fit into this drabble.
| laffers18 6/27/12 . chapter 1
It's possible that I love this more than I should, for the length that it is! LOL
But it's just...you say so much with so few words.
*adds to list of reasons to stalk Jen*
| Alidiabin 6/14/12 . chapter 1
Ooh drabbles. I like drabbles.
I like this. I like the metaphor of the middle of the road.
This is wonderful.
| ncisduckie 6/10/12 . chapter 1
...Very short. I have to say i don't understand it, though. Sorry :(
| mprmusings 6/10/12 . chapter 1
Indeed...i love the prompt "in the middle"...it's a place we all find ourselves at sometimes, isn't it? Looking forward to more! :)
| Anonymous033 6/9/12 . chapter 1
That actually sounds scary, for all the sweetness that it is. Haha.
I love how you've written it, though. What he can have, and what he can do, and how that might eventually change.
I really love it.
| magickmoons 6/8/12 . chapter 1
w00t! 2 jsq stories in two days! Is it my birthday? *checks calendar* Nope, just lucky, I guess :)
I really like this, the imagery is wonderful. I love how well you paint the picture of their past, present, and potential future(s).
Can't wait to read another!