| Reviews for In the Middle |
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Anonymous033 7/11/12 . chapter 2I don't know how you manage to make something so short sound so depressing (in a good way), haha. It's a talent! You're so good at conveying their emotions through so few words. It breaks my heart, seeing how hard she tries and how little she manages to move forward :( -Soph |
Phosphorescent 7/10/12 . chapter 2Another insightful drabble. |
JMHaughey 7/9/12 . chapter 2I adore these drabbles. . . . . . stuck in the middle of nowhere. ;) |
Amilyn 7/7/12 . chapter 2I like he reference to how she doesn't trust her own inner voice on whether she's found the right person. I think I wanted more punch on that concept, though. |
Leah339 7/7/12 . chapter 2Awww beautiful *.* |
jae-vous 7/7/12 . chapter 2I love your writing. You convey so much with so little |
Alidiabin 7/7/12 . chapter 2I love this look into Ziva. She need direction so very much. Wonderful. |
magickmoons 7/6/12 . chapter 2Another wonderfully poignant entry. |
Phosphorescent 7/1/12 . chapter 1Absolutely wonderful! I'm impressed with how much you've managed to fit into this drabble. |
laffers18 6/27/12 . chapter 1It's possible that I love this more than I should, for the length that it is! LOL But it's just...you say so much with so few words. *adds to list of reasons to stalk Jen* Brilliant. |
Alidiabin 6/14/12 . chapter 1Ooh drabbles. I like drabbles. I like this. I like the metaphor of the middle of the road. This is wonderful. |
ncisduckie 6/10/12 . chapter 1...Very short. I have to say i don't understand it, though. Sorry :( |
mprmusings 6/10/12 . chapter 1Indeed...i love the prompt "in the middle"...it's a place we all find ourselves at sometimes, isn't it? Looking forward to more! :) |
Anonymous033 6/9/12 . chapter 1That actually sounds scary, for all the sweetness that it is. Haha. I love how you've written it, though. What he can have, and what he can do, and how that might eventually change. I really love it. -Soph |
magickmoons 6/8/12 . chapter 1w00t! 2 jsq stories in two days! Is it my birthday? *checks calendar* Nope, just lucky, I guess :) I really like this, the imagery is wonderful. I love how well you paint the picture of their past, present, and potential future(s). Can't wait to read another! |