Okay so I had to leave a review for this chapter even though I'm not even halfway into the rewrite yet. But I liked this chapter! The whole scene with them going to the theater was very cute and so funny that EVERY movie playing is with Laguna. LOL I kind of liked their day together. ^_^

I'm really enjoying the revised edition and all the details you have added. I loved the original story, but the new one is even better! Thanks for sharing!

OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS STORY!! You should make a sequal!! It would be so freakin awesome!! I just loved it!!1

Ah, rats. I read this ages ago and I'm finally reviewing, really poor of me, I admit.

I love all of your epic Seifer/Quistis stories, and each one has a little something that makes them memorable. In this one, it's gotta be the ending. Love, LOVE the way Seifer confesses his love for her. That is Seifer all the way, blunt, no beating around the bush - "I'm in love with you." I find that scene stuck in my head quite often, as pathetic as it sounds.

You certainly have a way with words. Your style is very descriptive without being wordy (the best kind, in my opinion), yet it still conveys emotions. Your Quistis and Seifer are kept very well in character, but you've also made them human and easy to relate to.

You've got a nice mix of action and drama in all your stories. The storylines are original and well-thought out. I truly enjoyed reading this fic, and I wish you luck in your future endeavors.

O.o... woah...

Hey. Sorry I didn't review any of the other chapters. I started reading and only stopped to go to classes. When I got home I continued reading. It took me a good portion of the day to do so, but I couldn't stop reading this story until I was done with it. Its amazing. Great job.

Awesome. ^-^

This chapter was beautifully written, especially the part about Seifer dreaming of Quistis. Wow.

This chapter really had Jurassic Park vibes.
^-^ Awesome story so far.

Birds.
Fly.
Red.
Falling...
This is an abrupt change in style. I love it. It really breaks up your long sentences.

“Adrian put a hand against Quistis' back. "Tell him why he can't leave you."

Beginning of this chapter, Seifer was a little too “self-aware

Carson’s lame in this chap. My sympathy for him is waning.

Ooh, Island of Doctor Moreau vibes. I haven’t read the novel, actually. Saw the Val Kilmer movie.

Seifer gets 200 freaking hottie points for being nearly naked. Quistis gets 100 for being his accomplice.

Adrian gets 20 hottie points for being a good little druggie.

Ugh. Poor Carson. The guy really tries, and he really does love her (or an idea of her), and she’s off gallivanting around some James Dean wannabe. :(

Um, I’m getting some H.G. Wells vibes here. Oh.

Adrian gets 30 hottie points for being such a good wounded victim.