(MORE SEX) I have read your fan fiction from start to finish and it started out ok,but then got a little off on the story line,but other then that it was good. :-)

Oh my god that was so funny I just love this chapter.:-)

I just reread these little gems again and they are among the best fan fic shorts I've ever read. Thank you for all the pleasure you gave me with them.

3 you're a good person for writing this. Now if only they could get you to write the damn show

The answer to your question is nothing. Nothing could be better.

Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha I love that Angela continues to come up in the middle of foreplay. I adore how it doesn't even phase them at this point.

This was cute and silly and fun. And, I was sure with the chapter title, that this would be one of the more mature chapters, so thank-you for surprising me like that.

Well, this is certainly giving me something to think about until the season starts up. I hope you continue this over the longer hiatus.

Oooooohhhhhhhhhh I think my brain short circuited at this imagery. I may have to stop here and just go to sleep because I absolutely cannot imagine a better thought to fall asleep to...

Very cute, and I was actually wondering why they weren't living together, but if BPD and Angela are any concern, I guess I get it...

Awww. Jane is afraid of spiders! Adorable as all hell.

I do love these little slices of Rizzles life!

"Jane smiled against her lips. She wants this feeling more than anything; every time she wants it more."
You are exceptional at weaving repeating phrases throughout a story, making them mean something more each time they are read.

Just finished reading this, and I loved every bit of it. Not only do you handle their physical relationship very well, but I want to applaud your use of dialogue - sometimes I feel like creating believable conversations while also keeping true to the characters can be a difficult task. But you were spot on, especially with Maura, and it really was the excellent dialogue that made this fic so fantastic. You really captured the essence of their relationship so well. I immensely enjoyed this fic - so thanks for sharing. I'll definitely be checking out more of your stuff :]

Your banter is epic. The show would be lucky to have you and your artistic genius on staff .. ! Love, love, love the spider in the bathroom chapter. You are awesome! Have a great day !