I like your writing style and story line.
You are very creative and I enjoyed this fanfiction very much.
Sense the END had a "?" I'm assuming that there maybe a sequel to this,
if there is - I would love to read it
and if there isn't - the mystery at the ending really leaves an impression so I wouldn't mind if there weren't

It looks like we have a new enemy...maybe the X-men and Brotherhood may have to team up on this one

Pretty good so far. Like where this is going

Been a while since I've seen X-men Evolution so I forgot about Kurt's g/f LOL But I still remember loving the idea of Kurt/Kitty

Great work! A few grammatical errors, but this is really great and IC for everyone so far. Excited to find out what was interfering with Storm's powers!

That was very cute and it would be cool if you did continue.

Decided to give Slayers a break and give your X-men story a run. Really troubling start when Storm can't command the weather.

Awwwwww

im glad that ororo is okay

What happened to Rogue? Did she get a dose of the brainwashing thing destroying the wolves' minds? Is she gonna go nutso too?

I love every chapter they were all awesome keep going.

Aawsom as always keep up the good work!
From Dixi with Sweet-tea

...What did she say? Did she mix up her words again or something?

awesome!

Pietro coffee uh oh! And the anti-mutant group stole the blue prints from Magneto and that satellite is what's causing the heat wave and every thing else? But who's controlling the satellite? Shield? The Govenrment? Gah! stupid cliffhanger.