yay! I'm always a young arisen! boy or girl! it's all good! keep going!

Oh my... This is intense! I really like it so far, Onasaki. You should continue this one for sure :). I'd love to see how his adventure turns out!

Your Arisen is only eleven years old? I would be surprised if he manages to kill the first cyclops in the game. Also, the Arisen's hometown is called "Cassardis".

It's a nice take for an opening, but I wish you would add more chapters. I would really like to see how an eleven year old boy can fulfill his role as the Arisen.