Thank you for your excellent work on this story. The interactions between the people are great. Please keep up the good work. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Another one of those stories that I just couldn't stop reading...Merda...I'll never get anything else done at this rate!

Thank you your contribition...it was great!

Oops should have posted previous review with the earlier family story..Sorry about that

Just discovered this web site. I really like all the stories. Just a historic note you may be able to use. Comanche was the language used by code talkers in Europe during WW II. There is some interesting history between the Chiricahua Apache and the Comanche you may be able to use in future stories.

Back to ?normal?

Ya Terry is back. Now things may settle down but I don't think so. hurry back

Well Craig has certainly opened a can of worms now. Hope the boys get back ok. Hurry back

Well Craig certainly set the cat among the pigeons with that suggesting and fancy Actor agreeing with it. what will Terry do now? Gon on a mission without the boys, perhaps? Hurry back

Just the right amount of worry coupled with some light heartedness, Hurry back. Will Terry buy whale?

I can see them flanking him up the stairs...

Why do I get the feeling that little gun is going to play a big part in Terry's future? The conversation between Garrison and Actor should be interesting. Despite the debrief there still seems to be some tension in the air between the team. Hurry back

Well everybody is safely back home, so why do I feel the impending hand of doom? Hurry back Wild

whew. that was a lucky break for Terry. Glad they are all still in one piece so to speak but Actor is not going to be happy when he sees Terry's arm. Hurry back

Australian?

Uh Oh . I think Terry just 'got made.' Exciting chapter. Hurry back Wild