|Reviews for Finding Officer Bobby|
| moms5thchild 9/1/12 . chapter 13
Sorry I took so long to submit this review. I do like the ending of the story. Seeing Barbara's careless actions create havoc is a necessary evil, but her voicing her fear for her love's life is natural. She already knows that Ironside's job is what put him wheelchair. The mere thought of quadriplegia or any other disabling injury would cast this relationship into a sea of doubt. I only hope she conjures up the strength to keep this reationship going.
As for the Chief, he's pure marshmallow with children, pure annoyance for doctors and nurses and pure rock hard loyalty to those who have earned it. You write im very well.
| bluesybelge 8/26/12 . chapter 13
Wonderful ending to a lovely captivating story. The idea of again bringing them together at the movies as a conclusion is just great. Well done. Beautiful story one of my favorites too.
| Mounty Swiss 8/25/12 . chapter 13
Congratulations to this wonderful story and thank you very much!
This is my favorite so far :-)
| lemonpig73 8/25/12 . chapter 13
Perfect conclusion to your great story! I enjoyed it a lot.
| bluesybelge 8/23/12 . chapter 12
All's well that ends well. Isn't this one hell of a team? There's never been any better if you ask me.;-))
| lemonpig73 8/19/12 . chapter 12
I'm so glad that you didn't kill Barbara. It would have been terrible for the Chief. I'm already looking forward to reading more of their adventures.
| Mounty Swiss 8/18/12 . chapter 12
This is absolutely smashing! And you had set it up perfectly!
I like their caring for one another between all the action. Thank you very much.
| Mounty Swiss 8/15/12 . chapter 11
Aaah what a wonderful chapter!
But please, please don't let one of the women or children be hit - or else Ironside would never trust Ed again!
| bluesybelge 8/15/12 . chapter 11
Beautifull ! I have no other word for it. Your story is getting better and better.
Please do not let us wait too long to discover what "Oh my God!" conceals.
| lemonpig73 8/15/12 . chapter 11
'Oh my God!' is right. There's too much suspense to keep us waiting a whole week! Please update soon.
| moms5thchild 8/15/12 . chapter 11
You didn't! Tell me you didn't!
| Mounty Swiss 8/12/12 . chapter 10
Great! Please write on! Now! Urgently!
| lemonpig73 8/2/12 . chapter 9
Oh my, your story is getting even better! So many things happening: first Bobby and now May and Eve. Plus it seems that Barbara is gone awol too.
Forget about the crossover, you MUST continue this one asap!
| moms5thchild 8/2/12 . chapter 9
Things are happening at a mad pace. The Chief probably has a concussion and the women are all in danger. You are keeping your tension high, good show.
| bluesybelge 7/31/12 . chapter 9
You master very skillfully the difficult technique of creating suspense and then sustaining it.
You simply fooled us all by letting us believe the story had come to an end when Bobby was found but ... no sir. We're off for a second round of intrigues and crime. Simply smashing. ;-D