Was that...YuutoxSubaru in the making? More! I want more! I love the direction of the fic...wish you have finished it...

Oh god, that was so good! Love the idea of splitting the innocent Suby and the heartbroken Sumeragi *tears, still reading TB so the wound's still fresh, god the song in the background isn't helping* Uhm, yes review *focus* What's with the dark subby seeing everything the other 'light' subby sees and feels? That's just torture for the poor subby! He's surely gonna autodestruct (as if the program hasn't start running yet). But he's the most angsty character of X, ne? This other is enjoying human gentleness like being wrapped in a light blanket. He has gained everything, while his counterpart has lost almost everything. (I hate emotions, but that's an emotion). Please update!

Beautiful...please continue

Cheers, ducky. This is excellent (although I may no have said anything to that effect before..). You have perfect character description and plot development, and leave no large gaping holes that a reader can poke fingers through in a matter of seconds. All questions answered, and no vague explanations that don't really answer anything. No shallow characters, no characters that are excessively one thing and nothing else. Everything's perfect. Except for one thing. *glare* It's not done. _THAT_ is an unforgivable sin, seeing as how I've spent an hour reading this to find that it's not done. PLEASE update ASAP. It'd make my week. - And I love the way your portray both Subarus- happy, innocent Subaru, and jaded, absolutely hollow except for despair Subaru. _ Yes, well, you have my admiration. And I have a request- I host some fanfics on my site (exclusively X and Tokyo Babylon) and I'd love to add yours. If you'd like me to, or don't mind, please reply!

Thanks-

Rei

Nobody likes Hinoto-hime, do they? She really sucks.

I just wanted to say that you have a wonderful descriptive style of writing - not excessively wordy, and yet so easy for me to visualize - or whatever it is I do with words that comes closest, since I hardly ever see pictures or movies in my head. It's absorbing, like you're no longer reading words but just being pulled through the sensations and images.

I loved the proverbs - brings back fond memories of Japanese culture competitions, heh. I like how they wove into the story, although for a tea set they seem kind of random. How many more cups are there? .

Anyways, I will definitely continue reading. Just wanted to sing your praises now, since it came to me.

So Subaru was jeaolous to his younger self? Hmm, would Yuuto feel offend that Subaru slept with him cause he was so much like Seishiro? And wouldn't Fuuma be unhappy to know that Yuuto took a step forward him? I wonder what Kamui and the Seals do after found out that Subaru was the Sakurazukamori now? The first thing is of course to protect the younger Subaru so he wouldn't turn to be the sad and bitter one like the older Subaru was now. Hmm, maybe fate would be change totally since Hinoto's death. Cause her other self couldn't create destruction among the Seals. Please post the next chapter quickly!

wow! this fic is,.. is... SO MUCH BETTER THAN CANON!

sankyuu!

*nods* nice story...like it...wonder what Subaru going to do...humm...continue please.

Wow...this is just so good! Your characterization is perfect and I love the character interaction! Thanks for updating!

I absolutely love this story, and beg you to finish it by New Year's just because I don't think I could wait any longer to find out what happens next. _; Thanks for such a great story, and please continue writing more! Talent shouldn't be wasted, lol, especially when you have fans waiting. :P

Wow another story to be impressed by! I really love your style, it is very interesting and seems to work wonderfully with the CLAMP characters! I can't wait for the next part!

Sugoi! This is absolutely amazing! I love it love it I tell you! Can't wait to read more. _

Seishiro appearanced even in the dream was unpredictable. Ah, I like the 'Subaru and Yuuto moment'. _ Will Fuuma know about it? And what would he do? Hmm, it's a mistake for Subaru to let Hien lived. The others would know who is the new Sakurazukamori when they hear from younger Subaru about how was the killer look like. But again, if Hien not live, younger Subaru wouldn't have that thinking. So he would be crushed just like Subaru when he knows about Hokuto's death. Oh well, just post the next chapter quickly!

Nooooo! Subaru? Write more, write more! Poor Subaru, he's such a sweetie, you just want to hug him... I think I'm gonna implode if you dont update soon though x