Wow. Great story. Few make my emotions run as this one did. One moment I was happy the next on the verge of tears. Very well written with a great plot line. Good job.

Amazing.. Nothing less and a lot more.. I dot need to comment ever thing I liked about it, cause it would be I'm gonna comment one thing. The characters persinalities, expesially tony, were out standing. I have read a lot of ffs where the characters moves on too fast and everything is just too occed.. You'res were fantastic and spot on. Thank you for posting it..

"Because nothing is more dangerous than an angry American."
-Loki
DAMN RIGHT LOKI! 'MERICA!

Aww, They're Such A Cute Couple.

"See, this is why I keep you."
"I thought it was my outstanding people skills."
"You're sort of lax in that area, Dr. Banner,"
"Thank you, Thor. Had no clue."
-I Love How Totally Clueless Thor Is When It Comes To Sarcasm. XD

Personally, I Think Loki Was Just Trying To Get Out Of There Faster, Though He Did So By Saying Some Really Meaningful Stuff.

Poor Tony & Steve Though, Tony Being Scared Like That, It'll Probably Take A Long Time To Find All Of The Possible Triggers. Though Tony's Resilient, He'll Power Though.

Wow, That Was Heavy! Thinking That He's Just Dreaming & Not Really Free, Just Waiting For Himself To Be Woken Up Violently & To Be Back In The Horrid Room Again, Then The Nightmare, Where What Happened To Him Happens To Steve, & He's Helpless To Save His Fiancé. That's Like Torture. How Horrible.

But That Ending Dream Is Like Salvation. He Finds Himself, Battered & Broken & Saves Himself, Pulls Himself Out Of The Hell That Room Became. & He Leaves With Steve. God That's Got To Be Such A Relief.

Oh My God, Had Steve Been A Minute Later, Tony Would Have Died! Thank God He Showed Up When He Did.

Oh Man, That Must Have Been Terrible For Tony To Relive All That. & Telling Steve Too! He Probably Thought Steve Was Going To Hate Him & Leave Him. I'm Glad He Got It Off His Shoulders Though. He Can Finally Start To Heal Properly Now.

& Aww, Dummy Always Comes To Save The Day. This Time Instead Of An Arc Reactor It's A Box of Tissues. X3

OMG! Poor Tony! How Horrible! He Feels So Terrible: Thinking That He Deserves To Be Left & Treated Horribly For What He Did(Even If He Didn't Want To & Only Did So For Survival). It Wasn't His Fault, He Couldn't Have Stopped It, No Matter What.

& He Thinks That He's Dirtied Steve Because He Was Raped & He Had Sex With Steve. That's Got To Make Him Feel Even Worse.

& Now He's Literally Killing Himself. Poor Tony.

Oh Man, Tony Should Not Have Gotten Drunk. He Can't Control Himself When He's That Intoxicated. He's Like A Different Person.

He Knows He Was A Dick, & Then Bruce Shows Him The Ring Made Out Of Steve's Shield? Now He's Got To Feel Horrible.

& Poor Steve, He Was Going To Propose Or Something With The Ring? & Then Tony Was A Dick & He Just Couldn't Take It. I Feel Pretty Bad For Him, He Had It All Planned Out & Everything.

can i report abuse for emotional trauma ;A;

wait...that was the end. i seriously didn't notice until i read that there will be a sequel, so yay for sequel! xD
and holly molly, this was a fantastic story. i loved it! keep up the great work!

This story was just absolutely amazing... I loved it and cannot wait for the sequel

OH MY GOSH, THAT ENDING! THERE HAD BETTER BE A SEQUEL, OTHERWISE THERE'D BE A RIOT! This was such a beautiful story, I loved every part of it! This last chapter was fantastic, I loved it! I'm so glad that Tony was able to trust Steve like that again, and they were able to put the past behind them finally. (Although apparently it's not to last?!) Can't wait for the sequel! Great job with this story, it was fantastic! :D

Awesome! Seriously enjoyed this story!

oh wow that was just wow i loved it nice job the ending has me on the edge of my seat

Omg I'm blown by this I swear can't wait for the sequel xo