I love your story, please update soon.

Enjoying the story. But could you put a explanation up of the past and how Jack is Harry?

There's AU Harry Potter and there's this. You better put this so called fic into the crossover section. Crossover with Fail.

Wow, this looks great :-) It is well written, didn't find any major grammar mistakes and you manage to capture my attention with who you portray Jack as a man with secrets without saying so directly. I want to continue to read this if only to figure Jack out.

I like the way you keep us in the dark about him by simply not telling us; of course Jack isn't going to narrate about his past to himself and we have to find out with everyone else. That is a writing skill I envy since I use a lot of information dumps in bulky and long phrases.

I would really like to see this continued, 'cause at the rate you are going I think you will have a reader in me :-D

wtf?