cool.

Sorry I missed the last chapter's review, I didn't have a computer at the time. Anyway, these two chapters were pretty good and I like how you explained Bardock's emotions. I like how you made chapters that weren't all fighting because that's how it's done in the actual series. I prefer that you don't show the power levels if there hasn't been much fighting in the chapter be cause it keeps the reader in suspense for how strong they actually are. So, thanks for another great chapter.

Just two times huh? Think I know what's going on! Goku is going to have a little brother or sister!

She's pregnant?! Well granted I expected something like this, because Saiyans remind me of rabbits when it comes to reproduction. Or atleast that's how it would seem to me. Good chapter, it was pretty cool! Good reunion!

Great chapter so there's going to be a third child of Bardock interesting. I quite enjoyed this chapter and don't really think it needs to be changed, the only mistake that I really noticed was near the end when Maize said I'm stood right here, it should be "standing" right here.

Until the next one.

Ah. Another wonderful chapter. The chapter flowed as well as a creek with nothing in it's path. Sorry for the simile. Been reading stuff with Super Paper Mario, and the character Dimentio, who constantly makes similies. So, it's on the mind. Good chapter regardless.

Great chapter and I think I see why the King hates Saiyans with what has come to light about his son. Until the next one.

I enjoyed it

interesting

good chapter, you are doing well

Great

did he go back in time

nicely done

Why does yamcha have a wife he should be like 3 years old

Well done