|Reviews for Sins of the Father|
| Aqua 6/18/13 . chapter 19
Luv this so much! Really good for a first fiction! Please keep on going!
| A Light in the Night 6/18/13 . chapter 19
Very interesting chapter! I wonder what April willthinkof the new personal assistant!
| Guest 6/11/13 . chapter 18
Please add another chapter to this story soon! Can't wait to see what happens! Please update, this story is too good to be forgotten about:)
| ZabuzasGirl 6/3/13 . chapter 1
Update immediately, please!
| The Cookster 5/12/13 . chapter 18
I really am love this story! Cant wait to see what happens next! I hope you'll update soon!
| PhineasFlynns 5/7/13 . chapter 18
Oh god you're going to make me cry *tears up*
| LauraWinter 5/7/13 . chapter 18
The love April feels for Tony is so strong, so real. She goes through a true grieving process when she hears of his illness, and I really like how you wrote it, even though her pain was so strong. I like the added element of her saving him, rather than just him saving himself. It adds a love factor the original movie didn't really have. I'm not gonna lie, I really like the fights they have...but the sweet moments are definitely worth it. Thanks for a moving chapter, and once again...I love your story. :)
| LauraWinter 5/7/13 . chapter 17
Lots of things I am looking forward to, mainly because we've already played with these ideas in our awesome chats. April finding out about the palladium poisoning. And her finding a boyfriend. Angry Tony turns me on and I am not afraid to admit it! Okay, now specifically about the chapter...his first words to Pepper here were BRILLIANT! "I'm...sorry? You are beautiful...I'm an idiot." Exactly how I would have written it, but you probably did it better. Made me laugh out loud. And how he can "Stark" his way out of things. I loved it. And he totally can Stark his way out of anything! He's amazing, and you write him so well.
| LauraWinter 5/7/13 . chapter 16
So I already told you how much I loved this chapter, but it doesn't hurt to say it again! I LOVE Tony's line, "Honey, you won't even know I'm there!" I think I even said out loud "Yeah right!" Lol, I can see his grin as he's saying that. He's so awesome and perfect and I love him. And the fight they had was perfect. "It's shit." "It is NOT shit!" Then he goes and says "What happened to daddy?" Eeep! I melted. So freaking cute! Okay...onto next chapter.
| A Light in the Night 5/6/13 . chapter 18
Aww this was so sad!
| Tayla 5/6/13 . chapter 18
Poor April! I'm really close with my dad so I would probably react the same way. :(
| Tayla 5/5/13 . chapter 17
I saw Iron Man 3 last night and OMG I LOVED IT! I love Tony even more now! :D i just can't get enough Pepper and Tony fluff. ;)
| A Light in the Night 5/4/13 . chapter 16
Awww Tony was so sweet...and arrogant!
| LauraWinter 4/16/13 . chapter 15
I loved loved LOVED this chapter! This review may be long, but I don't care. First of all, the beginning made me literally laugh out loud. "Was my eye twitching?" Haha...I could hear his voice even though it was in his own head. He was so Tony when he was trying to play it up for the crowd, but still wanting to beat her ass. And April's reaction was perfect. Her aiming a punch at him was classic, and the bullshit to Pepper made me laugh too. I don't know why you were ever afraid of writing Tony. I think you've got him down.
His concern for her always melts me. Even in the midst of their fight, he still obviously just wants to protect her, and she just wants to be a part of his life. He still wants to push her away to keep her safe, and now she's too strong to let him. I love it. Thank you for writing your characters so well. Don't let him be a pussy with her either! Not that you would...I'm just making sure you know where I stand. :)
| A Light in the Night 4/15/13 . chapter 15
Haha the spanking bit was funny!