|Reviews for Square One|
| commandocucumber 6/18/12 . chapter 8
How is it that every chapter manages to be more touching than the last.
loved the "violators will be shot" moment. Sheer heart-melting awsome!
This procedure would perhaps have worked better if it were Garrus or Joker. Someone who'd been with him through all the most defining moments of the war, but doesn't quite have the same emotional engagment that Miri does.
| orenjikitty 6/18/12 . chapter 8
I'm sobbing legit tears. Miri...
| CyanB 6/18/12 . chapter 8
You made me cry. Now I have to explain, to my husband, why I'm crying before going to bed.
You write some very powerful scenes.
| Follower38 6/18/12 . chapter 7
Very very nice
| iDunnoWho 6/16/12 . chapter 7
this is th fic. E V E R.
| Dracconnis 6/15/12 . chapter 7
LOved it!an excellent update
| FloridaMagpie 6/15/12 . chapter 7
Quite a sweet sisterly scene here, and I definitely prefer your idea for Miranda's role in the war. Effing Jessica Chobot, taking up a perfectly good room that could have been full of someone useful (not to mention at least marginally likeable) like Miranda or Jack.
| general-joseph-dickson 6/15/12 . chapter 7
Nice job, more work to be done now.
| ipass 6/15/12 . chapter 7
Why are your chapters so short? I need moooooorre!
jk, ] no pressure. Keep up the good work!
| CyanB 6/15/12 . chapter 7
Darn right it should have been!
Love this chapter.
| LC 6/14/12 . chapter 6
This has been most enthralling thus far. I do have an idea for a future chapter that may or may not be rather interesting:
A flashback chapter in which Miranda and the crew either find Shepard dead or learn about his death, and the effect it has on them, with the emphasis of course being on Miranda.
Anyway, looking forward to the progression of this story.
| Janizary 6/14/12 . chapter 6
Nice save, Li!
| general-joseph-dickson 6/14/12 . chapter 6
Hell no, not a chance, you don't want to know the information, no...
| Dracconnis 6/13/12 . chapter 6
That was a close one!Damn..wonder what was in that message..ehehehe...loving it!keep it up
| A-01 6/13/12 . chapter 6
It's a shame these chapters are so short... I just want the wonderful story to continue!
Well written again, and the character interaction feels very authentic, if a bit brief; looking forward to the next chapter.