hURRY UP AND UPDATE IT IM IN SUSPENSE!

UPDATE THE FUCKING CHAPTER ALREADY!

Oh sorry didn't realized you updated. Great chapter as always update when you can

this story is awesome i lov it!

HA! First review. Down to business. For a prologue, you wrote that like a boss! Spartan... Best... Warriors... In ancient times. This made me picture this like a movie in my head. And the movie I saw was a collision of epic proportion! If this was a movie or an actual part of the GOW series, it would be better than 300 or GOW II. Oh and to tell the difference between you and your bro, are you doing the style of writing thing still with him doing italics and you with bold print? I think it'd be easier to tell who it is. ALSO... Is the reason time heals all wounds hasn't been added on to because of mine and grey wolf spirits ideas?

I'm gonna wrap this up.

Peace out for awhile angel style!