JUST AMAZING! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN NEXT! :D such a good writer

Yes, it'll be easier to read, you only have one paragraph for each POV.

I like it! I suggest that you make your paragraphs smaller. People will loose their place if you right so tightly. I'm starting on my story, so if you could review mine, that would be so great. Thank You!

Pelase continue! I love it, such a good fic from a such a good writer :)