|Reviews for A Nightmare's Jewel|
| Question 3/17/13 . chapter 7
So how is chapter 7?
| curlthebear01 2/22/13 . chapter 7
This story is great! I love demonbeast-meta stories. I like how Nightmare is shown to have emotion, and how the war does in fact have another way of looking at it. Keep up the good work! I really wanna know what happens to Meta now, and how Garlude and Jecra come back into play. :)
| BrightDarkness-2013 2/2/13 . chapter 7
Love it all. Nice job.
| Galaticx Knight 1/5/13 . chapter 2
Ahh, you have more reviews than me... :(
I lovez this! It's fun to voice all of the characters.
| Flamefox2 12/21/12 . chapter 7
I really think that you captured Nightmare's panic very well. I'm quite sure that the conflict between the GSA and NME is going to be heightened by the disappearance of Nightmare's son. Nightmare will want revenge against the GSA because he thinks that they killed the Prince, and the GSA really didn't, and they probably will defend themselves despite not knowing why Nightmare's fury is ignited. Meanwhile, the Prince is drifting around in space, in deep hibernation, likely to be found by the Galaxy Soldier Army...
MAN, MY MIND IS RACING WITH POSSIBILITIES. XDDD
| Paladin Knight 12/20/12 . chapter 7
Oh yay; you updated! :D
Still love it and I cannot wait for further chapters.
| Grievous daydreamer 12/19/12 . chapter 4
There's something about Meta Knight and Wolfwrath playing together that's just so... adorably bittersweet. I love it Great fic so far, and I'm only on this chapter! XD
There are a couple of small grammar mistakes though - "it appeared to of once depicted something..." should be "it appeared to *have* once depicted something." I think there were a few of those, not all in this chapter. But hey, I only fixed one of my four year old fics' mistakes this week...
Wonderful job so far, I shall be keeping an eye on this one. :)
| Fourletters 12/11/12 . chapter 7
(to lazy to log in, sorry!)
What I really like the most about your story, is your originality! Most stories I've read about Nightmare and Meta Knight bond means almost nothing. Mostly Nightmare sees MK as just trash. But this story.. I find it kind of touchingthat whole father and son union :P
I wonder what's gonna happen next? Until then!
Epic chappie.. !
| CheescakeFairy 12/11/12 . chapter 7
(rubs face against it)
But really now, this is sooo great. It had some lengths in the chapters 4 and 5, but nothing too bad.
I love your writing style, how it just... flows, so its easy to read and the plot -so far- is wonderfully thought out.
Please continue like this 83
| Jasminerose135 12/10/12 . chapter 6
OMG plz tell me I'm right when I say ARE YOU HINTING THAT META IS THE SHIP THAT WILL LATER BE KIRBY'S SHIP! Also the third part is Star Warrior isn't it.
| Guest 12/9/12 . chapter 6
STAR WARRIOR DNA
or...The sole of a star warrior
or...Essence of star warrior
I think we all get the gist of my guess.
I saw his ship in Kirby right back at ya! I love your story, please please please update soon! DON'T STOP THE AWESOME! I especially liked how you protrayed Nightmare's relationship with Meta, there are not enough stories that do the same thing. Nightmare is gonna be Maaad...I can just imagine him finding the crown and blowing up every single demon there. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
| sparklespepper 12/8/12 . chapter 6
Alright new chapter.
I'm taking a guess on the three thing but I think it's DNA from a Star Warrior.
I don't know if I'm right or not but it's a good try.
Update soon :)
| Imnobodyanymore 12/5/12 . chapter 6
Awesome chapter! I've enjoyed it a lot!
| Kirbymepoyo 12/5/12 . chapter 6
Yay finally updated!
| Paladin Knight 11/26/12 . chapter 5
So far, I'm liking what I've read quite a lot! Please continue as soon as possible! No pressure though; being a writer (though not of fanfictions) I know how hard it can be to find time between life and general lack of motivation. -_-' I'll definitely be checking back often to see if anything has been added! And is it wierd that I find the fandom canon of Meta as a vampire... fitting for lack of a better word? Ah anyway, good job so far!