nice chapter, a bit short but a solid one :) the comedy was good and quite realistic, i didn't mind that she was laughing her ass of right after birth, this is fiction, anything can happen :) there are one or two grammar mistakes but they don't hinder the story :) keep it up!

a nice prologue, as i said to you in PM i have no idea what this manga/game is about but this introduction of yours actually made it very appealing to me and i'll probably look it up in the near future (as soon as i have more than hour of free time) :) i did spot a few grammar mistakes but nothing too important, if you want me to point them out tell me :) anyway good job and keep it up