love it

Don't ever doubt that we won't read it! Sorry it took so long, swamped in the depths with homework. But this chapter was written beautifully. I really loved it! Is it over, or is there still more? I feel I could be content with either outcome.

This is amazing. Please continue it!

I'm so sorry I haven't replied sooner, things have gotten pretty busy and hectic and I finally got the time of day to check out the new chapter :) I really loved it. Especially the end of that chapter, with David not treating her like a victim. This is an infinitely great story, I just hope you know that :)

I liked this chapter, and how David understands and is trying to help her. Superb job!

Uhmm hey I guess.. listen I really loved your story, It's the best I've read on here.. So hope you update soon? I actually just watched the movie.. It was awesome so that's how I ended up here. So don't like, give up on the story or anything.. Keep writing!
-Maria

wow! you're story is so cool! i love it!

Oh, I loved it! You always describe everything so well in detail, it's amazing. It's like I can actually feel it. You are one infinitely great writer. Is this over, or is there still more to come?

I love this so so so so much! Please keep writing it!

It's nicely written so far and the suffocating, smothering feeling is really spot on.

I totally agree with you!
I can see the effort put into the story even though it is a short chap
Keep up with the good job yeah!
There are not many good speak fanfic out there,
yours is really good!
it stands out!
PLEASE update soon!

great chap great story!
like the descriptions very vivid!

That was a deep, emotional chapter. You did a great job.

I am in love! Please continue, it really is great :) this story made my day