Where's chapter 5!? I hope you plan on updating; I'm totally into this story already! :)

UPDATE! Please for my pet unicorn named Bob! He loves your story and will grant you a wish if you update...

HAHAHAHA yes, you go Clary! Kaelie had that coming, the little Skanksquatch, woo!

Oh my godddd, i need to know what Jace says! Ahhh this is the best Clace story I've ever read.

What?! Why would she do that?! And Jace, you stupid boy! What an idiot thing to say, great way to make her feel better ey? This is soooo good !

A friend just reccomended this story to me, and I'm so glad she did! if the next few chapters are as good as this prologue, i'm going to love it. Favourited and followed :)

haha lol xxxx

Good Chapter

I'm a little jealous of your writing ability, to be honest. If the plot is as good as the prolong it'll be an amazing story. The only comment I would make is get a beta because there were a few grammar mistakes you wouldn't have noticed rereading your own work. Other than that great work, very descriptive!

Omg hahahahahahah I can't believe she hit her omg that was the best thing ever!

hahahahahahahaha...I don't know or maybe don't even want to know what goes through Kaelie's mind brain when she went to hockey field, brough the letter 'P' and showed it to Clary...she deserves it.. when the hockey stick 'kiss' her face...

i love it, the hit at the end was amazing! :D

Hahahahaha, Clary definitely showed Kaelie who's boss.

Loved the chapter!
I just love Jace sooo much.

Can't wait for the next update!

IM SO CONFUSED! is she 15 or 16 cause before you said she was 15 but now youre saying shes 16

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Shit got real! I am actually in love with the way you write, it's fabulous! Please update soon! xoxoxoxox