|Reviews for Shop Smart|
| BiblioMatsuri 5/13/13 . chapter 1
I'm with Rufus here.
*snickers* I can just see Ron randomly running into her at a supermarket and starting up a conversation with her about nothing much, that Ron being Ron, mutates into this.
| Officer Hot-Pants 10/31/12 . chapter 1
By the almighty cheese, YES! Made of pure win and filled to drooling with awesomesauce (and perhaps just a hint of explodium).
| Joe Stoppinghem 10/28/12 . chapter 1
Read "Date Smart", so I had to come around to see how this all started.
Really enjoyed the dialog, and the concept of Ron and Shego.
Especially this one, where it's not just Shego say's "I love Ron!" and then the story starts.
Here we will be in on the process, which looks like it's going to be fun.
| dogbertcarroll 10/27/12 . chapter 1
Yeah, aim high, but remember what happened to Icarus.
| Guest 7/2/12 . chapter 1
heheheheh...HA! very funny, and quite entertaining
| Lord Sia 6/29/12 . chapter 1
| nimb09 6/27/12 . chapter 1
ron and shago is on of my fave. love the dialogue between them.
| RamaFan 6/27/12 . chapter 1
Nice...very nice writing. I enjoyed it immensely.
| Araeru.02 6/25/12 . chapter 1
This... Is... Awesome! Please continue, or don't. It's up to you. But point being, storyAwesome!
| JadedObserver 6/18/12 . chapter 1
I think Spike Spiegel said it best, " I love a woman who can kick my ass."
| Reader101w 6/18/12 . chapter 1
Very interesting story,
Bits and pieces are revealed about Ron and Shego's lives that match really well with the show.
Very interesting is their view on the world and their relations with Kim and Drakken.
The realism in this story is both frightening and enlightening, but it makes the story really step out.
All in all a very good story about Shego being 'off the clock' and Ron - although being his own goofy self - being able to carry a conversation without panicking immediately.
There are some minor spelling errors here and there, but nothing that disturbs the story flow or distracts from the overall story.
Keep up the good writing,
| pbow 6/14/12 . chapter 1
This is a very good story and almost demands another chapter or sequel. Will Shego follow thru on her threat/promise to take on our blond boy and let Kim deal with Drakken? Will Ron survive the battle? If he does, what happens next?
There are too many questions for this not to have a sequel.
Please please please!
| Mahler Avatar 6/13/12 . chapter 1
This is an amazing KP oneshot. You've struck a perfect balance of many KP tropes here. And nothing seems either overwrought or underdone. If I were as good a cook as the Ronster (And yes, animekingmike, Ron did occasionally refer to himself as the Ronster), I might describe your receipe thusly...
Add one part Ron's goofiness with one part Shego's sultriness. Mix together with clever dialogue and a dash of accurate references to the series. Blend slowly in a Smarty Mart checkout line. Simmer as Rufus sees what's coming. Serves two.
And I see there's more to come: add one boiling Kim into the mix, but just make sure that your fire extinguisher is fully charged.
Skål! (from a third-generation Swede)
| Esiw Yug 6/13/12 . chapter 1
I have to say that this story and its sequel was very impressive. I have read stories about Shego and Ron becoming a couple or other stories with a similiar background but never this well done. How you slowly build up their casual interactions and then piece by piece explain how these two became closer is quite frankly, and I love it when you bring it all to a head when you have Shego acting like a freaking psycho and trying to beat Ron to a pulp. God this is so freaking awesome I am genuinely disappointed that I have not heard of your work until this day.
| timt020 6/13/12 . chapter 1