Yay! No more Oscar(: Maltara forever! Teehee! Alot of mistakes though, you should totes edit this one. I can help!

-Natalie, your cousin (I don't have to say 'your cousin' anymore, do I? No? Well, OK(; )

Omg that was one scary ass dream... o_O I'd cry as well XD but yaaaay, Maltara! :D heh, so cute! Gotta love it, right? :D
-Lisa

Haha I like how Oscar's dead but they don't call anybody to come get the body or anything. LOL PEACE OUT OSCAR

Yay! Maltara! AWWW...so ADORABLE! :')

Wonderful chapter and story! I loved it! And you killed Oscar, which makes it all the better! Kidding. Not! ;)

-Katie

Hmm..
I guess I like your writing and Mal and Natara together but I think it'd be better if Nat dumped Oscar. If he was killed you never knew if they would have married..

Awww Mals okay! Yay! :D

- Molly

Oh no,my rugged babe:(

That was a crazy dream...

Yay!MALTARA!

Please Update Soon!

-Tori:)

I don't really think Oscar is dead after all. teehee :P

-Christie

Omg don't kill Mal :'(

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! :( Whyyyy?! Poor Malachi... Even worse; poor Natara o_O
Loved Neha in this chapter though :D Please continue to update!
-Lisa

WHAT?!
Mal's been shot!
Why?!

Oh,Neha eating
cake:)

Well,Neha is
right,she should
date Mal..I mean,
Bad Neha:( You
don't say that!
(Hee-Hee:))

Please Update
Soon!

Oh no! Not my rugged babe! :O Aww poor Natara... Bless, haha gotta love Neha! Great chapter!

- Molly

Omg! Please continue! You have too

Oh my god! Oh my god! Oh my god! Please continue, this is great

I really like this story so far! Im really not a fan of Oscar so in a horrible sounding way, I'm glad he's gone!.. Well, in this story I mean. Haha is there going to be a 3rd chapter?