|Reviews for Ohana|
| 4thofFive 5/11/13 . chapter 32
It's a good story but?
"Danny could always insert a little hump rom" - what's hump rom?
Maybe before you post a chapter you could read it aloud to yourself to you catch the mistakes?
| francis2 5/11/13 . chapter 32
I so love this story, one cliffhanger after another. Now please write soon.
| francis2 4/21/13 . chapter 31
What a reveal. Now Steve will be even more determined to find his mom.
| Gepospenguin 4/13/13 . chapter 1
Really Great! But please hurry and finish!
| francis2 4/10/13 . chapter 30
FBI? Can't wait to find out.
| francis2 3/28/13 . chapter 29
Steve just bought some time. Hope he gets them out.
| msbookworm93 3/26/13 . chapter 29
| Guest 3/25/13 . chapter 2
interesting...I have to admit I've only skimmed the story...looking for any Chin chapters...and you could get a couple intense ones...if the guy wants to know about Doris the two best to interrogate would be the two who know/knew her best,,,Steve & Chin !
| Runner043 3/24/13 . chapter 28
I do hope you will be continuing this story.
| Runner043 3/23/13 . chapter 11
Ooh, threatening Grace... now that's gonna cause some problems.
| Runner043 3/23/13 . chapter 6
Chin giving Steve an order. That's gotta be awkward. Something tells me that Steve doesn't listen very well.
| Runner043 3/23/13 . chapter 4
Very intriguing story so far.
| lanteaddicted 3/11/13 . chapter 28
| msbookworm93 3/10/13 . chapter 28
This story is super intense! I'm loving it!
| Craftygirl11 3/10/13 . chapter 28
What happened?! I hope Danny is okay. Just who is Charlie Raymond? Update really soon. Please.