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| Reviews for Ohana |
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  4thofFive 5/11/13 . chapter 32 It's a good story but? "Danny could always insert a little hump rom" - what's hump rom? Maybe before you post a chapter you could read it aloud to yourself to you catch the mistakes? |
 francis2 5/11/13 . chapter 32I so love this story, one cliffhanger after another. Now please write soon. |
| francis2 4/21/13 . chapter 31 What a reveal. Now Steve will be even more determined to find his mom. |
| Gepospenguin 4/13/13 . chapter 1 Really Great! But please hurry and finish! |
| francis2 4/10/13 . chapter 30 FBI? Can't wait to find out. |
| francis2 3/28/13 . chapter 29 Steve just bought some time. Hope he gets them out. |
| msbookworm93 3/26/13 . chapter 29 Intense! |
| Guest 3/25/13 . chapter 2 interesting...I have to admit I've only skimmed the story...looking for any Chin chapters...and you could get a couple intense ones...if the guy wants to know about Doris the two best to interrogate would be the two who know/knew her best,,,Steve & Chin ! |
| Runner043 3/24/13 . chapter 28 I do hope you will be continuing this story. |
| Runner043 3/23/13 . chapter 11 Ooh, threatening Grace... now that's gonna cause some problems. |
| Runner043 3/23/13 . chapter 6 Chin giving Steve an order. That's gotta be awkward. Something tells me that Steve doesn't listen very well. |
| Runner043 3/23/13 . chapter 4 Very intriguing story so far. |
| lanteaddicted 3/11/13 . chapter 28 cool chapter |
| msbookworm93 3/10/13 . chapter 28 This story is super intense! I'm loving it! |
| Craftygirl11 3/10/13 . chapter 28 What happened?! I hope Danny is okay. Just who is Charlie Raymond? Update really soon. Please. |
