please dont stop writing, i love this story and would love an ending

Why did you stop posting? I love this story, please don't quit :-)

Pls tell me you will be writting more soon I lovee mikes nikename puppy hahahahhah

Cute! Idk what that reviewer was talking about. My three year old cousin lovesss to be held and sit on my lap when I babysit. My five year old cousin too.
One thing tho: maybe write out how John says things cuz three year olds still mispronounce a lot of words idk just suggestion
Good chapter :)

Amazing chapter! :) Update soon. :)

Yeah I don't even like Thi story anymore, like the timeline is wierd and idk.

how old is John? three? I don't know where you're from, but three year olds I know can't hardly connect the bat with the ball.
but other than that, I thought this chapter was really cute!

Dear Guest

I'm struggling to understand whether you are sincerely unintelligent or just unpleasant. Your last review baffles me. A story is defined as: "an account of imaginary or real people and events told for entertainment". Let's also go for 'fiction' while we're on the topic shall we: "literature in the form of prse, especially novels, that describes imaginary events and people". I think this makes it abundantly clear that the contents of the story are at the discretion of the author. The sole purpose of this forum is for individuals such as AnAverageGirl15 to write their own stories about characters from tv shows/movies etc such as Suits. AAG15 has never claimed that her characters are IC all the time, and nor should she be required to. I would suggest that the presence of Harvey having a son is slightly less cannon than some of Harvey's words and actions (please do correct me if I'm wrong).

I'd also like to point out that the chapter took me over 10 minutes to read. If you thought it was a 'waist' (read: waste) of words, then more fool you for taking the time to read it. You are also foolish to have 'waisted' yet more of your own precious time writing a review. Your chat is appalling - take it elsewhere, or at least be bold enough to criticise without using an anon. penname. I think that is all I have to say to you (and by the way, you may well perceive this to be a waste of words, but I've had a great time writing it, and I'm willing to bet that there is at least one other person who appreciates that I've taken the time to question your motivations).

AAG15 - I thought it was fantastic and I'm thoroughly enjoying reading a well-written story about Harvey with a son. It's fanfiction for a reason and you have free artistic license to create/remove characters as you see fit to provide entertainment to others. You're doing a cracking job.

It was OOC and frankly a waist of words. This was Harvey making piece with his nanny which was needed, but writing isn't about explaining every single thing that happens. It's about telling a story and this definitely strayed from the story. And where did Harvey's brother go all of a sudden? And Donna just dissappeared for the whole day and Mile didn't call.

I wish Donna would have been invited too.

I really love your story, it's really good. I love Harvey with a kid fic, thats why i write baby mike lol. Juat one thing, if i was to just read chapter 8 alone, i would probably think that mike was about seven and not three, due to his attitude and dialogue. I still like the story though

we get to see a lot of harvey and donna in this, but can we possibly see johnny depending more on donna? all that mother, nurturing is so sweet. and harvey should see that lol

This story doesn't even make sense anymore. And plus what about Harvey and Donna? A 3 year old doesn't sleep all day and definitely doesn't sit in someone's lap all day. No one would have died if Harvey wasnt at the office when Daniel came back, so it was selfish for Jim to go.

I Love John... he's adorable... a little more of John with Mike & Harvey would help... and I'd love Harvey and Donna to be together if possible... Sorry for making sooo many requests... but your fics are all soo good... and am already greedy for more... :D

Just read all 7 chapters...Has me wanting more of those cute Donna/Harvey moments :) really good job