Reviews for A Shocking Surprise
Alvinatty4ever 3/18/13 . chapter 4
Alvin isn't taking this well. But who would? Theodore, he's just taken it the wrong way. Eleanor was just trying to comfort Alvin, and I know for a fact that she would never be with Alvin. Alvinor is not right.
Alvinatty4ever 3/18/13 . chapter 3
Jeanette isn't acting like herself. Simon AND Alvin got hurt by her. Why is she being so mean?
Alvinatty4ever 3/18/13 . chapter 2
Oh my Gosh...
SimonettexTheonorxAlvinattyFAN 7/18/12 . chapter 6
Yay! Theodore and Eleanor made up! But boo :( Poor Alvin. And poor Brittany. And Simon's cousins have electric powers? Cool! I hope they can cure Brittany! Great chapter! Update soon!
SimonettexTheonorxAlvinattyFAN 7/18/12 . chapter 5
Sorry I haven't been reviewing! I had to get stitches in my finger and I couldn't type :(. Anyways, this was a great chapter! I'm so happy that Simon and Jeanette made up! I hope Theodore and Eleanor can make up, too. I also hope Alvin can see Brittany soon!
EverythingAtOnce 7/17/12 . chapter 6
I swear certain people can be soooo oblivious to things!;) Aww! Well, let's hope for a miracle!
Chipettegirl4life 7/16/12 . chapter 6
Great story so far! Keep it up.
EverythingAtOnce 7/5/12 . chapter 5
Aww! At least Simon and Jeanette have things settled! But poor Alvin and Theodore...hopefully things will come to an understanding and Brittany will be alright! Update soon:)
chipmunksforlife 7/4/12 . chapter 5
pleae continue it is realy good hope brittany makes it ok
CreativityShines 7/4/12 . chapter 5
The simonette is back! *start doing the directioner's inbetweeners dance and sound!*
YAY SIMONETTE!
We are lucky as cheese to have an awesome writer like you writing awesome stuff like this! Thank yoooooouuu!

Update soon!
xxRossLynchLUVRxx
Kuro Rakka Shimo 7/4/12 . chapter 5
*tail wags with excitement* YES! THE SIMONETTE IS RETURNING! *dances* Awesomeness as usual sis! Can't wait till the next chapter! KRS, Out!
Guest 7/4/12 . chapter 4
Another amazing chapter! The author is probably one of the most creative and smart people ever to write fan fiction.
Guest 7/4/12 . chapter 3
Great chapter! Probably one of my favorite fan fiction stories, too. Looking forward to next chapter!
Chipettegirl4life 6/28/12 . chapter 4
Cool chapter! very nice. Can't wait to read more.
Subuku no Jess 6/20/12 . chapter 4
Hi there. I think this is really great so far. :)

Sorry that I didn't review sooner. I really like it. It has suspense, drama, romance, and everything. Things are starting to turn from bad to worse and I hope something good happens soon.

I think like each chapter should be a little bit longer... just a suggestion. :)

And where's Dave in all this? Just wondering since the Chipmunks always live with Dave (unless they have their own house or something XD )

Anyway, nice chapter and update soon! :)

Jessy
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