Just re-read this and it was just as good as the 1st time :)

I loved this! Really well written, but not overly uh...Raunchy. And I loved their relationship.

This is very well-written, and I enjoy your use of descriptive language. I particularly like the line, "Kissing and telling, kissing and leaving." It definitely works for a quick, steamy read, but there are certain emotional elements in the story that could benefit from being more fleshed out. One has to stretch their imagination to believe that Katniss, a sexually inexperienced and emotionally traumatized character, could so instantly become a lustful vixen. It's a stretch I'm willing to make as a reader, because I'm into the pairing, but in the broader picture it comes across as a little emotionally dishonest. Either you've got to go head-on into the realm of the pornographic, fully embracing that suspension of belief that is necessary for an outlandish sex scene, or you've got to monitor the careful pacing of a realistic sexual encounter. This story seems to hover between realism and PWPsexyfun. In any case, you really do have a wonderful writing style, and this was an enjoyable read. I look forward to checking out your other stories.

this was really good! :) xx

I love it! You are so good!

I love that! 'Because one thing is for sure: I certainly worked for it.' It's just like the perfect way to end it! I just love it so much. Unfortunately. I have to wait on your story "Fix" because I have to read Mockingjay first. Y'know to fully understand all that awesomeness. So yeah. But as always you did an amazing job, one question though. What's NSFW? Cause I don't know what that means and I must know!

Love, love love this story. You have a real talent on prising out the sensual undertone of the scene, whilst keeping the Katniss and Haymitch in character. Love this pairing, and hope to see a lot more from you!

No snipes, just props! Awesome!

ummmm...Haymitch and Katniss are the oddest pairings ever (haymitch is an adult and katniss is only a teenager!)

You did such a fantastic job with this one! The best Hayniss fanfic I've read on this site, probably. It seems true to both of their characters, but you twist it in a way to make a relationship between the two of them seem probable. Well done, and thanks for sharing! :)

This is such an intriguing pairing and while I'm Peeta's girl all the way, you're starting to make me absolutely love Haymitch (not that I didn't really enjoy him before). Your writing style is something I don't see much of on this site and I absolutely love reading your works. I'm pretty sure I've already fav'd you and trust me how much deserve it. I'm anxiously awaiting the next update on any of your stories!

I am totally in love with your writing style. No denying.

This was SO beautiful! I really loved the descriptions/dialogue, so it wasn't rough at all! I adore this pairing, and I'm so glad to find great authors like you who know exactly how to capture them. I'll be sure to read more of your work later! :)

Sorry, can't find anything to snipe about really. ;) It was really good, and I loved it. :)

Yayy Haymiss :) this was a good read! The only thing I noticed was that in the beginning you described haymitchs hair as being blonde (like in the movie) and later as dark (as described in the book series). Hope you plan on writing more NSFW fics centered around these two!